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I love this story. What will be her next trial, and what are the trails for? I wonder. The writer needs to do more on this story. I can’t wait for the next one to be done. Will she become a godlike person or what,l. Also she needs to have more girls in her harem . Get a lizard woman and others please.
so they want them to escape. Im just kidding. but you should change this.
You need to change Their to There, and I see a couple other grammar issues to in other paragraphs.
you spelled scent wrong.
the first number here is higher then the second.