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Cory_Tuckett

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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett2yr
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    I love this story. What will be her next trial, and what are the trails for? I wonder. The writer needs to do more on this story. I can’t wait for the next one to be done. Will she become a godlike person or what,l. Also she needs to have more girls in her harem . Get a lizard woman and others please.

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    Rebirth Online: From Single Mother to OP Demon Lord
    Fantasy · Sfayte
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Commented

    so they want them to escape. Im just kidding. but you should change this.

    Vitiate didn't mind fighting these Vampires, but Siena couldn't defend herself in this situation. He quickly grabbed her hand and made a run for it. "What the hell!? Catch them, they're trying to escape, we can let them get away!" Edman screamed hysterically, everything would be ruined if they got away!
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    Dungeon System: World Of Chaos & War
    Fantasy · Monster_Paradise
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Posted

    I like the plot and the characters. He needs to get his stepsister as a lover too. and get more demon slaves like foxy. I think he should have a girl lizard man and a girl Catlike demon. I like that there is a demon realm and a normal, earth realm.

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    The Incubus System
    Fantasy · Nanakawaichan
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Commented

    You need to change Their to There, and I see a couple other grammar issues to in other paragraphs.

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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

    Ch 62 Changed Woman
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    Mastermind: Genderbent Villainess
    Fantasy · Oscillating_Sine
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Commented

    you spelled scent wrong.

    Lucien could smell Ghilanna's musky sent growing more and more. He also wanted to lose himself in pleasure now, but his mind was focused on resolving problems first. He also wanted to take it slow with the sweet elf, so he held out his hand to her with a gentle smile on his face.
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    Lust Knight
    Fantasy · LamenThief
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Commented

    the first number here is higher then the second.

    Points for next level: 3430/3000
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    Hypnosis System
    Urban · Kwalsky
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  • Cory_Tuckett
    Cory_Tuckett3yr
    Commented

    See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

    Ch 10 The weapon choices
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    A New World, an immersive game experience
    Games · Breuno
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