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Filodir_Maskov

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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
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    very, very good chapter

    Ch 7 Prologue 7: I find myself sympathizing
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    hm ...

    "I am all too aware of the great burden placed on my shoulders, and I am all too aware of the great pains that my subjects have to bear because of this war." The actor speaks solemnly, with a voice full of weight and power, and maybe even a little bit of shame.
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    grt chp

    Ch 6 Prologue 6: I find myself getting distracted
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    maybe you just don't know about the profession you would be passionate about?

    Gah! It just doesn't click. I can keep going through every profession in the world, but it's just a big, far no in my heart. And it's not like this is the first time either. I have thought about these things so many times already. It was part of the 'finding my missing pieces' quest. I never got anywhere.
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    [img=update]

    … What a drag!
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    let's go

    "Alright, you bitch, just wait a goddamn second here!" Even I'm surprised at how vitriolic my voice comes out.
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    wow, that was not the attitude change i was expecting from her

    "I see you have some skills." She says, returning back to her arrogant attitude. "Would have been nicer if you would have just displayed it earlier instead of standing there like a brainfriend monkey for a full minute."
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    good chapter.

    Ch 5 Prologue 5: I find myself confused
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    fine, i like it too

    Ch 4 Prologue 4: I find myself alone
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    [img=recommend]

    I am everything, and I am nothing.
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    relatable, haha

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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    we HAVE got a fiesty one here.

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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    not the best options, i have to say

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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    I think this sentence needs to be rewritten.

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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    ...

    Simply because it feels pathetic to do so. Laugh if it seems funny or immature but I don't want to feel like a parasite who can only survive by using her as a host.
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    then why not do it?

    I'm not dense enough to not understand how important this woman is. I'm also not stupid enough to not know how easy my life will become if I start throwing around the fact that we have a good relationship.
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    wow

    "... She's some kinda pedophile who's been stalking me for a decade now."
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    then i guess they aren't that close?

    "Oh yeah, I completely forgot you lived in this neighborhood."
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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Posted

    It's good but maybe not for me. Idk, a lot of you seem to like chapter 2. I didn't. But that's alright. It's well written. No grammatical errors or typos and it might become really good. Idk. Try it if you are reading this review before doing so and form your own opinion. Not much else I can say.

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  • Filodir_Maskov
    Filodir_Maskov1yr
    Commented

    thanks for the chapter, man

    Ch 1 Prologue 1: I find myself wondering
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