honestly these book has a lot of potential expect the harem route stuff is not good cause what i like in inazuma the sense of adventure and dealing with hardship you made little to easy for them and the part that annoyed me the most that you dropped it before the finale match of the football frontier 😭😭😭

well i made some mistakes here .sorry guys but i fixed .Happy reading

alright I will try to live up to your expectations what you say make sense but again I can't promise you anything because my work just started and had a lot planned but I don't want to spoil it right now. I will try to make updates daily and I will takes some idea from history some tactics from great general Hannibal Barca and recreate it for my own use ..[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I want to thank you again for reading my story.As for naming characters Im not that good at it im open to any suggestions.I will not follow history throughly .As for Rome wont be better to have united as an empire right of the bat so they can be seen as formidable enemy.All in all I greatly appriciate you reading my story it means a lot to me.Thank you

sorry bro again I'm not that good at giving names I will accept any suggestions

well the time period Its first punic war when Carthage suffered defeat I want to change history you see I will add a volume 0 and I'll add the timeline how about that??[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

well I'm not that good at giving names do you have any suggestions I will immediately change the names I'm still a newbie author of course thanks for reading my novel by the way[img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]

Author here I like to express my gratitude to all the readers that stumbled upon my work .I am great admirer of carthage civilaziation and espacially its famous general Hannibal Barca .So I hope for this to be a great reading exprince for you guys ..And of coure a shamless 5 star rating .

at first I was confused by the title but after I started reading it I liked the story and world building and I didn't find any problems with the writing qualities it deserves a solid 5 star in my opinion and I'm happy with consecutive updates 🥰🥰🥰

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it's amazing [img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls][img=More pls]

it was a great work but alas he dropped it

huh I hate this ☢️☢️☢️☢️

please 🙏🙏🙏🙏 don't drop it this yugioh fanfic has so much potential 😭😭😭😭

I have only one thing to say ... AWESOME 😎😎😎😎

this book has so much potential for greatness 👌👌👌👌

I like your work and I like the other work to they both have so much potential especially the old one I like very much but it pains me that you dropped it 😞😞😞

well I liked the idea 💡 one again if you find trouble look for chat gbt it helps a ton🥳🥳🥳

just do your best and if you find trouble look for chat gbt it helps you a lot and I hope you succeed [img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong]