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Erikbongo2dReplied to Jay_Crew10Ch 393 Information About Celestial Worthy- Erikbongo6dReplied to jufgkuyhlkhkufvytvCh 324 Which Is True and Which Is False
- Erikbongo9dCommented
Am i the only one who though (OMG is this Klein?)?
"It's called the Idiot Instrument that tests an individual's intelligence. Or you could say that it measures a person's foolishness." - Erikbongo2mthCommented
how?
Whatever… if she wishes not to, then I wish not to either. Still, I was confident that there will come a day where the two of us will be peaches and cream once again but until that day comes… well, there's always television. - Erikbongo2mthCommentedCh 69 Survival Enactment
- Erikbongo2mthReplied to Overlord_Venus
This is a good explanation. However i agree with the commenter that it should have been made clear. The mc absolutely did what he did while he couldnt feel emotions. But that shouldve been clarified better in the story. I didnt realize the mc would go that far until he did it, and I wouldve never known he felt such desperation because you never wrote about in the story. It was jarring, and still is.
"I feel alive! So, this is what it means to have a body." Jyorta muttered, clenching his hands, feeling the sense of touch. It was a wonder; the world around him was huge and finally, he could take in its grandeur, through his own eyes. - Erikbongo5mthCommented
I dont know man. This feels kind of meh. The drama isn't really written dramatically. Im interested in seeing the mcs perspective in the matter of like "does my father even care" etc. This feels as if its written as just a prelude before the actual story. Id much rather actually have this be interesting. Sorry if I missread how this beginning was written but i really dont feel like this part of the story "matters" for anything else than a shallow introduction to the characters in the story.
Ch 2 Coffin Jockey - Erikbongo5mthCommented
Awesome
Thus, he had taken a risk, and illegally imported some pornography from one of the neighboring Alien civilizations. After all, the Great Oni Empire had a thriving pornography industry, and they were relatively close to baseline humans in appearance, albeit with horns on their heads. - Erikbongo5mthCommentedCh 82 Quest Completion And Bountiful Rewards!
- Erikbongo5mthCommented"B-But it has good stats!" I cried.
- Erikbongo5mthCommented
she has a title that gives her 150 to all stats though doesnt she? Is it equipped? Thats pretty relevant right now
[LUC]: [65 -> 70] - Erikbongo5mthCommented
SUS. In the game it said she could talk to animals🤔
Blackie sat down in the entrance of the house as he saw us walk outside calmly, cats could be very intelligent sometimes, he even understood what I meant! - Erikbongo5mthCommentedCh 5 Meeting The Squirrel-folk Alchemist
- Erikbongo6mthCommentedCh 1 Prologue
- Erikbongo7mthCommented
The last few chapters have been overwhelming. A lot of concepts, as well as characters have been introduced to the story again. I look forward to reading more, and seeing how this progresses. I feel very excited as well as anxious. The story concocted so far has been very commendable. Thanks for getting to read it.
Ch 73 A Real Hero?