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Thank you for the review! :D

Got it, will work more on the content of the characters. Thanks for the review!

Thank you for the positive review! :D

In my opinion the start is very basic, but that doesn't mean that it's bad! I like the storytelling, the style of your writing is just- it feels unique somehow. Regardless, I would recommend reading this and this review will also be updated once I have read more!

After reading the first few chapters, the writing is very detailed; the description of the explosions and thunders are a little extreme, but other than that, a fantastic start! Highly recommend checking out this book. This review will be updated once I have caught up [img=recommend]

I am genuinely captivated by the plot of this story. The palace backdrop (which I like) as I've always had a liking to these themes, starting off with invasion really hooked me and I think will hook a lot of people. The dialogues in particular are exceptionally well-crafted, I feel like it connects you to the characters. Highly recommend this story! [img=recommend]

Flint is a really interesting character and the plot is full of unexpected twists that kept me on edge. Anyone that enjoys adventure with a drizzle of magic will love this, me included. Good work!

An interesting mix of Sci-Fi and Fantasy? Nonetheless, the beginning was very smooth. I can see a lot of people that would easily love this story lol. Grammar is great, and storytelling is very strong.