Hi, love your story. Will you ever make it to the 'tales' world that the apple and orange gels come from? Another world I would love for him to go to is 'Solo Leveling' and have the Master of Death meet the Shadow Monarch, might make for a fun time.

After a couple of weeks are you going to have Harry be a sub seeker and say that the snitch just flew into his pocket and pull it out?

Make it that Danzo and the other elders are embezzling the money for root and other off the record expenses. That way Root can't afford to expand its influence nearly as much.

I can't wait for the next chapter. They can't kill him now Konan is a fan of his work. Now all she has to do is read Konoha Love Story and she may want to stick around there for the next month waiting for updates.

Have Ino ask his to show what under his mask. And have him reply 'You will have to know me a lot better before you ask me to start removing clothing for you.' then turns to Hinata 'You on the other hand can look under my mask anytime you want. With those eyes you can look under all me cloths anytime you want, just keep the results to yourself.' Hinata turns beet red and passes out.

Harry going for quitich might be a little unfair, not only will he still have normal Harry level flying skills, but his states will be substantially higher than cannon Harry and he will get a +20 stat boost on the field.

If You feel stuck on who to get next you can always spend a few chapters getting to know the girls he has now and raising their level of affection. He has a lot of D rank girls that he should spend some time with and 2 girls that are not even D rank. Throw in some dates or picnics for him to do with the girls, something non ninja related. Romance man romance!

Maybe if she goes full body venom, it will get the rinnegan.

There are enough Hashirama cells floating around the village to get a wood/blossom release. Mix that with the Uzamaki huge chakra pools, sturdy body and healing factor. If she keeps her chakra control and brains, you get a very foraminal ninja.

I thought she would be at lease a C rank. It's not like this is the first time they interacted, you said she has been building feeling every time she saw him training with Garra and before. If he did just impregnate her, I would think she would be at B rank by the time she gives birth to his first kid.

To max power XP grinding from reading: 1 ) make as many clones that you can that will last 8 hours. 2 ) give them all 2 books on a topic, like medical justus 3 ) Read book pass left, read book pass left until all of the books have been read by each clone. 4 ) dispel clones gain full xp time clones plus understanding times clones. I figure just rereading the same couple of books would get you less XP for every extra read but if it is new for each clone they each get full XP.

Who was the son?

So ... Acme smack down? Step 1 ) Put something heavy into inventory. Step 2 ) Silent apparition to the tree branches above him. Step 3 ) Pull the heavy object out of inventory above his head. Step 4 ) Say "Beep Beep!" just before, or to be safe just after, it hits. Step 5 ) Put mess back into Inventory.

missed a 0 at the end. he got 1000 ryo not 100

Can you get Fu as a queen? The 7 tails is a beetle after all, imagine adding that to the swarm.

I was very against the whole Anbu route to avoid the Root route, then I looked at the cover pic and it shows him in an Anbu mask. I was like 'face palm' of course the author always planned for him to join Anbu, duh.

Honestly, I could never see Naruto in Anbu. Sure he is good enough to be in it, he simply refuses to follow orders. Remember, Naruto's most powerful skill is his talk-no-justu. I could never see Naruto going to assassinate someone, he is much more likely to turn them to his way of thinking and become allies then to simply kill them. Mind you I would easily stick him in the T&I department, he could get anyone telling their most guarded secrets to him.

This reminds me of a flame war I had with someone. In Naruto he learns 1 skill from the scroll and only 1 skill. The guy I was arguing with swore up and down the 'Shadow Clone' and 'Mass Shadow Clone' were 2 completely different techniques. I argued that no they are the same, it all depends on how much chakra he put into it. I'm glad you explain exactly that.

I'm almost upset that the graduation is so soon. I was hoping that the teacher would teach Naruto tree walking or chakra nature or other stuff. You have him set the textbook on fire than not show what he teaches for the last week.

I don't know about you but, being stuck in an illusion where you feel yourself being eaten alive, possibly from the inside out, by bugs would be a lot more traumatizing than being tired to a tree and stabbed again and again. The tree thing is what Itachi uses on Kakashi, and he was in hospital for a couple of months dealing with the mental trauma.