WattsonSimp

Yo this chapter might be a lil ahead of schedule

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It's not bad lots of grammar mistakes, also really childish. Many mistakes with the power system. Because 100 points on every stat is supposively the strenght of a peak rank A but then Link somehow is at the same level as him. Also when he surpasses the 100 threshold with his concentration ability which means some of his stats go to 140 he still can't even touch a rank S kind of confusing.

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Love the story!

Honestly I am loving this book, great writing with a bit of everything. Side stories, past memories it all connects amazingly well. I am in absolute love with this book keep it going.

I love it!

So is the skill making based on the level so Level 100 = Skills or Depending on skill level need this many levels?

Pretty bad grammar not to the point where I can't understand, still pretty bad. Writing of the novel in itself. Well first chapter "describes room" never shows any thoughts of the main character and then big boy says "transmigration is real?!" Make it make sense, if you've improved your English or if you are still going with the novel think of editing it

Cool