
hi I write alot books
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describe the scene and the movements of the characters, this allows the reader to infer the emotions of the characters instead of you just stating them
you need to start a new paragraph when someone new speaks.
more telling not showing, and you need to space out your paragraph because the huge wall of text makes it hard to read
your telling not showing with the first paragraph.
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