Lasanje_Maggi

Really like the story and the characters! Hope to read more, much more !!!!❤️

More details would be nice … He build a whole kingdom and the only story you have is that he build it There isn’t a real story… or any details But I like the idea ;) Keep working

The progress is a bit to fast …. I think

The original is way better …. Now it’s just an idiot who fucks around The characters are way worse than bevor as well …. Read the original story… this one is shit

And black clover

Ur content is nearly completely copied from „breeding dragons from today“!!!

Ur content is nearly completely copied from „breeding dragons from today“!!!

So…. The normal water whatever can breathe under water and swim… /‚d the ancient can’t ? Wow

Sorry but her element is water or not ? Why doesn’t she go inside the water ? Why does she use a boat? And seems afraid of going in … ? 😂

To slow ….