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being honest Ken is starting to be more of an protagonist than hero more abilities and other people are taking more of an interest to her even max so I think you should make our view go back to hero and max fight maybe 1 more chapter of everyone else's view but if more it will start getting boring. don't get me wrong its not at all boring but starting if you don't switch back maybe 1or 2 of the other characters views. So that's what I think also there were a few mistakes but all good so when you get back to hero and max make interesting also can you produce chapters maybe 1 or two day to make a well thought-out story it's your choice and this is my opinion
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ok so far so good it looks like you already have skill names for hero and kitsune do you have skill names for everyone else? Also hero skill lots salt it has something to do with seraphim of the end the anime I believe I'm 💯 percent right if not then a bit disappointing
can please make hero and max destroy some people before they fight but still fighting in the same chapter all of that in the same chapter please and and on the second part can you make them switch through everyone this is my idea of course you don't have to do it just consider pls