ya know, i wouldnt be upset if you decided to do an additional chapter a day :P but also im a greedy little gremlin thats addicted to this story

i feel like thos is the 2nd chapter for today. and i am absolutely thrilled to have another ❤️

and the thick plottens. loving the development

contemplating* interesting typo though

hoot? wouldnt an owl be slightly MORE distracting?

you are forgiven this time :P thanks for the chaps <3

what were you even attempting to say here? proof read your story please.

yes. yes it is. and im thouroughly depressed. its usually out 2 hours ago on the dot. and today is sadness and despair and heartbreak

i love how the story. never feels to slow nor to rushed. its always a good chapter that keeps my attention from start to finish. i just wish i could have more cuz im selfish like that. but i love the story.

this chapter was painful to read with the insane amount of typos. please work on editing. thats a massive flaw with this entire story.

might as well ask allura to freeze the sun with her ice powers instead of hoping zenia wont cause issues. far more likely to happen

author has a billion typos per chapter. an editor would be an incredible QOL update for the story but im guessing not enough funds to aquire one.

precipice means edge. saying shes been on the verge of dying so many times that it is almost normal for her. death is as scary to alice as a dog is to us, even when we know dogs are tamed wolves.

my biggest complaint is ONLY one chapter a day. but thats the curse of a good author isnt it?

think of if the assassin's ability to jump into shadows and reappear elsewhere was the first choice of a new person. if they have a poor battle sense, they could very well dodge one attack just to put themselves in front of another. same idea goes for Alice and the option to be spider woman. if she latched onto, say, a gorilla esque monster with her webs,she would at best mildly annoy it, and at worst give that gorilla a direct link to her body that it could use to rip her in before she can react and one tap her. so if you put zero thought into it, then yes this is artificial and forced. however, anti hunter abilities are weak and niche. anti monster abilities are extremely potent and absolutely can be used as anti human, but thats not the reason the hunter chose that type of ability. the 4 sigil guard's ability to restrain a single target in close range might not be very useful if thats their first ability against a monster that is strong enough to naturally break out with little effort. i feel like anti human sigils could be best described as more support oriented at best in a monster fight, and only useful for physical enhancement at worst.

thats a beautiful stpry in one swift chapter. absolutely love it. thank you

nice little incredibles reference with the yak yak attack XD loving the story and thank you for your dedication <3

foreshadow? numbers dont have shadows? crazy talk i tell ya

you have the audacity to have a normal life outside of creating this masterpiece? how dare you. you should be ashamed XD hope you have a great holiday. no matter how long it takes, ill always wait for the next chapter ❤️

just casually erasing that zone of existance from history. you know. as you do.