Thanks for your opinion, and I will try improve it, so look forward for the future chapters.

This novel is a really great read, that is for sure. The 1st chapter has an amazing start. The grammers are good, and for sure have a lot of future potential too.

From the auther, I have changed some new details to the story, and combined the initial chapters together so the story is standing right where the other one was.

I am the Writer, and this my first work ever so I am aware it has some flaws but I try to improve it, so I wish you continue to read it, and I wish you like it as the story progress in the near future.

I am the Writer, and this my first work ever so I am aware it has some flaws but I try to improve it, so I wish you continue to read it, and I wish you like it as the story progress in the near future.

Thanks a lot for reading, and I asure you that I am working on improving the G part, and very grateful for you review and advice😄

Thanks for reading, I appreciate that, and wish you will read the future chapters too 🤝🏻

Thanks for reading, and it gets longer as the story go so wait for it😁

Thanks a lot for reading, and I am sure you will enjoy future chapters too