I read this story before he started to rewrite it and I loved it and so far I still love it I do like the fact he gave a little more of Tal's back story on how she got hurt in the army can't wait for more to come out

See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza

Because not everyone just throws around there weight around just because they can and secondly it much easier to move around unnoticed if you dress in common clothes

just wondering if there will be any more after the last chapter or if you have dropped it

ok this is the second book today I know I hav already read the chapter I just unlocked and read the other one is the one k started because I was at the locked chapters waiting on the fast passes

hey did you happen to have put this on watpatt because the last two or three chapters I have had the feeling like I have read it before but the ending of this chapter is when I knew I had I remember the characters name and the whole self monologue but I am like 53 % certain I did not read it on here but I could totally be thinking of a different story as there are a. few I have found on here j know for a fact I read them first on watpatt

ok I may have initially miss judged the direction I was going here but from what is here it seems put together well and sounds interesting as all get out it I am most definitely going g to add it and when k get done with the one I am currently almost through with only got ten or so chapters to go but only being able to unlock two CD chapters a day unless except sundry sucks the chili ring of a homeless bum I wish they still made your daily sign in a site wide instead of now being a single works

well as an avid reader a story is not good if all it is is action with no plot development so to me making a few chapters here and there to develop or advance the plot is not only wanted but in no way beginner author focuses on or even does

I thought I recognized this story I originally found it on watpatt and loved it is it finished or is there still some coming can't wait to read this again and see what happens where I left off at when I left watpatt and started using this one

I am just imagining the absolute nightmare he is going to be when he gets bigger he'll even as a juvenile he is going to be so OP that it would probably take at least 50 to a hundred people to even have a chance of winning against him

well technically it is the metallic dragons that are noble the chromatic and elemental dragons are usually deceitful and more likely to destroy a village for fun but as it is actually a human soul in the body it could work

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man these people are worse than moronic not to listen to him concedering what just happened yesterday it may be wrind and screwed up but I hope karma plants it foot so far up there a** they can taste her foot in there mouth

see I am of the opinion what he did was was worse/better depending on your view point with them alive and bleeding that attracts predators that then cause them way more misery than just out right killing them I would have been disappointed if he just killed them

why should I take a vaccine that is completely ineffective against what it is supposed to fight not to mention how fast they come out with it compared to say small pox even with the advancements in the medical field if nothing feels off to you about this whole ordeal all I can hope is something will open you eyes before it to late but your dissision to believe in the vaccine is not going to stop me from reading this story and as I get fast passes continue with your other one as well

it stands to reason little old demon ladies would just be worse than little old human ladies and I would rather go in to battle against a thousand people butt naked and bare handed than mess with a little old lady