EdTheBeast123

In all, with all the errors, a good story. I bit boring in places, but also exciting in others. Marrying all the girls, exhausting. Thought there would be another bad guy when the story said and ancient evil coming.

2 different versions of knowledge. Centaurs took her or how could she have fled Hogwarts.

This retell was the opposite of the prior info. Still a good story, even with all the errors.

Where did the basilisk come from. Not the chamber, so who, what, where, and how.

This seems more AI written as Rowena stayed with them and they helped build her body. So why was it necessary to be introduced.

Loved the chapter, even if it all was written twice.

This is getting a bit off. How did Fleur win with Harry and Ron getting to the cup 1st. Are you telling me that his protection did not allow him to feel where Harry was. Still think the story is good.

Loved the chapter. Still reading.

A bit confused as you said owned by that Snape read, but latter, that no one knows who is the owner. Still a good read.

He knew Ron had it earlier. Again with the time slots of the chapters being off. Still enjoying and happy to read it.