great story, could be cleaner, and the grammar could be much better, but over all great story, can't wait to read more, I love it thank you.

me too

umm are there more chapters or are they coming soon, cause it's just getting good

what about the fact that he is cheating on her and she knows it, hello, I would be pissed if I were her

OK, good story, but kinda pissed that the lead female character is let just say, weak, she should be more solid in her resolve, not give in so easily, no wonder they hate humans, uuuuggghhh!!!!! This story makes me want to kick her ass for being so soft, she should have more fight, hello this asswhole kidnaps her and trys to control her, and she just let's him, WTH!!!!!!