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Editor? "was the level 55 Warrior, Duan Leie the level 55 warrior Duan Lei"
This book is pretty good. Not something that I would expect on the voting pool. The world-building is lacking because it is in our world but I live somewhere other than the original author so I don't have the same inside knowledge they do. A couple of things can get lost in translation but that is through 40 chapters, not enough to throw off the entire novel. A little cliche with the background of being abandoned with his mother by his father but the plot plays out quite well. 7/10 overall, good read if you have finished the popular list books.
This is some peak writing. The MC gets a system but it doesn't become a cheat. By training and learning the mc can slowly get better and activate skills for activities. The story is well done and the villains are decent as well. I wish this had gotten selected. Please come back, Author! (4th time reading through).
The novel is quite good. Cheat of having higher health points isn't overused or make the MC invincible. The MC doesn't have plot armor but gets good equipment and skills due to his experiences. World background is low, not really described. Great potential as long as the cheat doesn't become ridiculous or overused. Keep up the good work.