jackice21

Disclaimer: I don't normally write reviews without reading much more chapters, but since the work doesn't have any others I'll give it a start. BTW I'm leaving this review at Ch. 17. The writing quality is excellent as well as the characters that you meet. There is a lot of things that aren't mentioned at the beginning which seems a little lazy, but it might also be a method of making you think about things and want to read more to answer your questions. Can't say much about background as you don't see much at the moment. Though the update schedule seems quite concerning. Definitely has potential and has a good start, a few clichés here and there, but those make a good novel if used right. Honestly I think it will be a good novel at least and hope the author continues to make it work. Good Luck to you author! P.S. If it gets up to Ch. 100 someday I'll make another review then.

when next updates?

Overall after reading to the most recent chapter, I am impressed with the author's work and choice of decision's for the MC, at first i was disappointed and confused about where the story was going, it felt like the MC is running away from everything, but then i thought of it differently, when i realized he was in a unfamiliar world, alone, now it makes more sense. I think the author needs to smooth out some of his writing style so that we aren't confused about what the MC is doing, but honestly I'm quite impressed because didn't think I would enjoy as much as I have, keep up the good work author!

A year? I'd say a week.

dam not even seen as human, that's so ignorant

Beyblade Let It Rip!!!

it wouldnt have happened if you weren't so ignorant

She is a joke, lol

I suggest adding an 18+ warning at the beginning of chapters with NSFW content, because that was definitely a surprise

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