Thanks for the chapter. We still don't have all the attributes for all seven daughters. This tsundere loving one will truly bring a "golden" child into existence. To represent "that attribute."

Hey man. I hope this isn't quite disrespectful to this author but I do need to say this. If you know about or remember any plot holes of the series written by Vic, can you post them in the chapter comments section. Or comment on my comments there about them. I am helping Vic fill in the plot holes that need to be fixed. I have gotten others mentions as well on the discord there. In my DM. If you are in there send me a DM about them so I can mention them to Vic...... Sorry Mr. Author of this series here!!!

More. Time for a baby to show up in this series 😈. The criticism I should provide can only be done if there is a discord. But there are some things that don't exactly have to be mentioned. Like the word "smooch" and stuff like that. All you have to do is describe the kiss without the sound effects. Some special sound effects placed strategically is fine. You can work on that in the next one.

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That should happen after Victor conquers the four sectors he currently has his eyes on.

I understand that. I was referring to a list of plot holes. And posting it in your personal contact.

Thanks for the chapter Victor. I will send you that list I mentioned in the helper area through your direct message. When I get the chance to.

Thanks for the chapter Victor. I will send you that list I was talking about on discord in your direct message.

Thanks for the chapter. I will send you that list in the direct message on discord that I was talking about.

Probably helps explain the goddess that is married to the queen.

Thanks for the chapter. This was a fun one. Now I really want to know "how" each of those goddesses were "made" 😆. Because in all honesty. Some of those dark attributes are needed to be the person we are today. Helping us be better while pursuing our goals any way possible. Some of us have been there. And I think that the red goddess truly needs someone to help her guide her attribute itself in the right direction. While guiding their daughters and the attributes they represent in the right direction....... I wonder. If that bad woman that has her eyes on Astra is "related" to "both" of those Goddesses as the mortal descendant of all the first children born who then had children with mortals.

Another plot hole. Unless he gives a legitimate reason 😆

Also.I hope you see the other two comments. The regular comments. Not the two replies to this one.

If you see this. Please don't show a male part for the Alpha Omega power if you let her use it on Christine to make a baby. "Use your imagination" with the magic of "Yuri Power" Baby Making. Keeping it as Yuri and female x female focused Snu Snu. Same for when Raphael is able to use the same power for making a "trap (fem boy) have his baby" since it would be a waste in the future for him not to be taking advantage of that power. He will be living for a very long time and get more powerful in the future. Turning into higher versions of what he currently is. His morals on this stuff should be changing since he has these powers that can evolve to even more powerful forms of themselves.

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Also. Adding on to the other idea. After Raphael saves Edith and her family. He should put his baby in her to make his baby the first in line to take the throne after Edith becomes Empress. I can see Edith taking charge of the succession of the next in line because of the combination of what will happen because of the enemies and her being backed by everyone from her harem to the common people. But I don't see anything happening to the current ruler just yet. I do see her having something happen that will help her become next in line though.

Hmmm. Very delicious. Now... the only criticism I will provide about the Snu Snu is after this next chapter is written. That way I can provide some positive criticism to help you. If I am able to say it right and even able to. With how this place prevents comments from being shown at times. ......... Now!! On to the romantic yet hypnosis like Snu Snu!! Time to make her forget him and get a baby inside of her!!!! From Louise, especially if Raphael gave her the Alpha Omega power that he has. A baby inside of her will make the marriage alliance get done faster. Especially with these enemies around the corner. Then Raphael will put a baby in the other girl that is interested in him to start the marriage alliance with her family. Then finally Raphael will save Edith and make her fall in love with him. Especially with the "help" of her "harem of guys" that should definitely notice something is off about her. Even if the things she used helped them fall for her, they should truly love her with all their true feelings. Which will help her become a strong "Empress of the common people" while all her male harem that would include Raphael will showcase her united power against their enemies. Bringing out an Anti Villain personality that roots out any rebel faction or area that joins the real enemies. And crushes them under her Imperial "Anti Villain" Heels. Research what an Anti Villain is. It is the same thing as a villain but different. Just like how there's a Hero and an Anti Hero. Both of which are heroes but act differently.

I'm gonna have to read the rest of them later 🥺

Okay. Thanks for the chapter Victor

Ohh. Time for Raphael to save the damsel in distress. Same for her family. If Edith truly has a good heart, she could make a good ruling Empress. Especially one with a reverse harem that has Raphael in it. And her in Raphael's harem. She really could bring out the Anti Villain side of her once she gets saved. Making for a great romantic alliance with Raphael's faction.