See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair

Not you using the "they is an incel, not their fault" defense. They are still sprouting a lot of s*xist talking points as if it were the 50s. Furthermore, if they truly had issues with writing women, they could involve some women beta readers from their discord or other sites. It's just pure laziness on the author's side.

I wish that someone gave the author a planner or a notepad. The number of plot lines that they discard is kinda disappointing. One of the main things that annoyed me was how the deal that Roland could cast spells in the real world was not some big reveal or a shock. He just uses magic hand and...nothing. Next time we just see him using magic as if it was normal.

This book is the example of good ideas, but poor choices. You can clearly notice when the author switched from good writing to just pure s*x and dirty/lowkey s*xist jokes. However, chapter 741. I can overlook and cringe at edgy 13 year old humour, but what the author writes is borderline r*pe of the main character. His best friends get him seriously dr*nk, and the girl that had a crush on him for 'years' (An example of another forgetten storyline from chapters ~400) takes him to a bed. She when cl*mbs and makes red marks on the bed to suggest that they had s*x and guilt trips him next morning to have s*x again. This is not cute, and as someone that had a similar experience, the least the author could had done is given a trigger warning. I even wonder how webnovel would allow something like this on their site.