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At least someone that kill his enemies before they are rescued, bravo!

Reading Tolkien, I always thought of the avari and what happened with the Cuiniven, so reading your version is a delight, thanks for exploring this possibility ^^

How dare you let me alone with the Admirals, Brook !!! Only because i asked for them? how shameful... Rocks is acting like a clown.

MC changes between trying to be a badass against any offence to be the submissive dog of the emperor. Good read if you like that.

Very good but i feel that there is no chances to the world because of knowing the Future, but maybe it will come, even If only as the pasta of Giovanni, It continues yo be a good read

He ist know for taking revenge, but now decides to let it go? Sounds like a coward that is only true to himself against weaker oponents, but will see...

Empezó interesante, el mundo tiene buena pinta, pero el MC pierde toda voluntad ante problemas con la chica que le gusta, asumiendo la culpa ante problemas que ella causa, aceptando ser atacado por ella, que está le ordene a su antojo y básicamente en modo Simp, ya no seguiré leyendo.

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Sin coherencia con el pj creado ni con las circunstancias que propone para la historia, forzando la trama en lugar de desarrollarla.

Thanks for the chap ^^