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Unless he copied Justin's skill! Ohhh I c i c, wrinkly brain author!
But he said it was a B tier skill? Doppel is an SSS skill, how did he bypass the lie detection with that blatant a lie?
I desperately wish for this work to be recognized. This is the definition of gold, from story, to characters, to world building. This story is perfect. The only saddening aspect I have is that in 5 months there's only been 61 chapters, which of course could be do to extenuating circumstances. But, please never stop writing this, please. I love this work, and wish to see it succeed. Professor Kal and the gang all the way!
Please don't ever stop writing. This story has engrossed me within both the world and the characters. The way you effortlessly flux between main characters and the author, while both building the world around them is insane. I love this story, and it baffles me how it doesn't have 5 stars. I'll give you all my power stones, all my coins, just please don't stop writing!
Also another reason why brain surgeries are done with the patients awake, so that Doctors know if anything is happening
Grammar isn't the best, which is to be expected of a new story. But, my area of gripe is the fact that the MC is expressing emotions as an 'emotionless' character. You can't design a character with such a complex narrative and suggestion and completely disregard it. Interesting plot and amazing theoretical character design, but the execution is lukewarm and forgoes its meaning.
Loving the story thus far, it's setting to become a phenomenal story. The world is a bit nuanced, and we're given nothing in the first few chapters as to the contents of this 'Planatoria.' But, I'm enjoying us unraveling and understanding the mysteries of the world through the eyes of our melancholic and enjoyably 'human' MC. I also really enjoy Necromantic works, so this is right up my ally! Quick question: Will the Undead become more sentient (i.e Speech, more intricate/complex actions)? I like when Undead have character and aren't just mindless. Nonetheless, whatever route you take will be great, you've already laid an amazing foundation! Excited for what's to come :~)
You've created a masterpiece. From exposition, world building, suspense, character development, plot, and overall engagement. I usually dislike being overly positive with reviews, because critique serves in the favor of helping the author. But I truly have no complaints about this novel. At first I was thrown off by the shift of perspective between characters (with some other than the MC taking first person narratives), but it encourages a shift of world view from just the MC. And how, albeit being the MC, the world doesn't solely revolve around him. I wish I'd have found this earlier to throw Power Stones at it, but for now on I'll be doing that. Thank you for giving us this easyread, I love you.
This chapter gave me chills. 1,000/10 I'm shaking.
Giving money to beggars doesn't have anything to do with being 'blessed.' They could have given them one gold coin or even a coin worth a fraction of a gold coin. It's the fact that not one single player did that in the week the game was active that's the source of disgust for the MC.
I understand this thought process, but the MC has stated in previous chapters and has made it abundantly clear that his interest lies solely in plant/flora. Especially coupled with the wonder he had in his previous life where greenery and natural skies were non-abundant. Coming into a world where said greenery and naturalistic wonders are abundant, it makes complete sense he doesn't have that 'wonder' for anything aside from plants. I actually like the consistency in this aspect of his character.
It's because he'd only known evil, he'd never grown accustomed to performing acts of 'good.' Therefore this instance, and the path to growing the 'good' fruit is new to him as he's having to tap into a side of himself that he only recently knew existed. It's actually really interesting and adds depth to the story!
He is on a mission, so the owner sending in people to disrupt the flow/progression of his understanding and experience of the mortal world and his mission, would indeed warrant him killing them.
Allegory of the Cave reference?!
Mighty comical you resort to calling them stupid alongside the misuse of the proper 'you're.' The MC is also mighty stupid in that the money being offered by Carlos was offered (as stated in previous paragraphs) as a salary. Meaning he wouldn't take out a loan, and would just be working to earn the money to save his sister. Anyone with common sense and a relatively humane grasp of pride and importance would know that this is better than getting beat up and having their dying sister sit in a hospital.