BleachedKage5x0
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BleachedKage5x05dCommentedFor a moment she looks at me exasperated, but then she registers my words and I finally see where all that fear she held for her father went as her eyes practically gleam with vicious intent "A visit home doesn't sound so bad after all."- BleachedKage5x010dCommented"Shit." The priest curses, and then quickly pretends he said nothing as all eyes fall fall onto him.
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As far as I know Kakashi never made his genin join the genin corps. Instead he made them pursue civilian carriers.
Of course, at the moment they were few, due to the volatile nature of the shinobi world where conflict could escalate to fully-fledged world wars, but in the future, their numbers would rise because of one copy ninja's high standards. - BleachedKage5x026dReplied to Jordinary
I don't think so. You underestimate Yuna's cake prank mastery.
Out of nowhere, a cake hit him in the face, breaking off his train of thought while dumbfounding him greatly. - BleachedKage5x026dCommentedOut of nowhere, a cake hit him in the face, breaking off his train of thought while dumbfounding him greatly.
- BleachedKage5x030dCommentedThe sarcastic use of one of her rare positive titles finally manages to get a reaction out of my sudden but not unexpected guest, as Boethiah narrows her eyes at me, a glint of interest shining in their molten amber.
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It is better to break it up and bring the relevant info into focus whenever it becomes relevant.
The massive info dump was needed for this chapter, since it was needed for the future plots. - BleachedKage5x01mthReplied to Chino_Kitsune
Fair enough but I feel that is not communicated well in the story.
The final trial brought forth the awakening of chakra, a momentous occasion that would determine each candidate's potential as a shinobi. With bated breath, Hiro closed his eyes, reaching deep within himself to tap into the wellspring of energy that lay within. - BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedAh, the sweet smell of progress!
- BleachedKage5x01mthCommented"Come on man, don't blueball me here!" Sanguine begs after a bit more silence.
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Mythical Zoan: Tako Tako no Mi model Kraken
'Luffy's fruit would have been nice, but I guess that's taken~ Mhh~ I wonder if there is a Tentacle Tentacle Fruit?' - BleachedKage5x01mthCommented
mindbreak complete
[That... you know what? Sure, whatever. You're welcome.] - BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedMy conversation with Harkon replays in my mind repeatedly as I sit down on a half rotten chair, my breathing growing harder by the moment and the walls feeling as if they were attempting to swallow me whole.
- BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedI give him my sunniest smile while lazily twirling my sword around "I am certain I have no idea what you are talking about General."
- BleachedKage5x01mthCommentedThe burning eyes turned to him as blood evaporated from the gigantic hawk "Don't answer that." The bird commanded.
- BleachedKage5x01mthCommented"I need a map imperial operations within Falkreath, as well as the position of the command center." I rub my hands while my smile turns slightly feral "I have a city to conquer after all."
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small typo here
"Let's check the roof real quick and then head back down." They opened the door wide and went outside. I radidly darted from my hiding spot and rushed towards the door. Whoever owned this building in the past took their security seriously. The door had three deadbolts and a large chain to keep it locked tight. I quickly slammed all three deadbolts into place before I started chaining the door to the wall. - BleachedKage5x01mthCommented
everything is fine
"Eh, maybe. Or we step it up and all of a sudden the surrounding fifty kilometers disappear. But don't worry! The rest of my clones are evacuating everyone. You'll all be safe."detailThis Isn't Canon! (Or that time I reincarnated into an AU-Naruto)Anime & Comics · BalancedSelfInsert - BleachedKage5x01mthCommented
I love avatar a and there should be more fanfics for it +1
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Cool setting +1
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