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That was 8mths ago? I stopped a long time ago
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Were you unable to see the other comment saying the same thing? I admitted that this one sentence can be seen two different ways. Where Im from when you say “eyes” you mean a pair, and the example I used was if I said my arms hurt, I mean 2 not my 3 arms because on average most people have 2 arms. So I said I could be in the wrong in this part. Im fine with admitting when im wrong
I gave up on the novel awhile ago, so I dont remember much, but from what I do remember it was only one guy who got mad because he wanted to alpha male and the other 3 were perfectly fine. 7 min is still early, but you also have to remember he didnt have a car and had to rely on a bus which has a set schedule. Thats not something he can control
I may have said this later on, but if not I’ll say it now. Just because you are best friends doesnt mean you think EXACTLY the same. Similar yes, and probably agree on almost everything depending how close you are, but you arent the same person. Youre two different people with two different thoughts. You arent clones of each other. You two have two different views on things and should have different thought processes. If not, then that “best friend” isnt needed in a story because they sony bring anything to the table. Might as well have the main character just talk to a mirror. It just does nothing for a story
I love the hostility you have, but this seems like the first time youve actually disagreed with anything ive said till now. I want you to message me back when the author messed up again on his new ability range. go ahead
I’ll allow this one to pass because ive heard it both ways. Where im from when you say eyes, it means a pair. Its like saying my hands hurt. You dont have 12 hands do you? The average person has 2, so you can assume they are refering to their 2 hands.
Key word “around”. They know he didnt have money for a car and has to take a bus. He was still early no matter what. If it was a formal business meeting, maybe MAYBE, Id understand more so, but its a casual meeting of friends. The other guy just wanted to be alpha male and let it be known hes in charge. Im more so upset with tyr author’s lack of mathematical skills. When I commented I was more frustrated that they couldnt seem to keep to the script that was written. Ive long stopped reading this novel because of the inconsistencies and the subpar quality. I did give it a chance and even spent money for this so I guess tge author wins no matter what, but whats done is done. Pity because it had so much potential
Plot armous isnt always a bad thing. Sometimes we want our beloved characters to have a little something extra that makes us remember why they are so amazing. I mean we dont want a story to be too realistic if its supposed to be a fantasy.
Sounds stupid doesnt it? People dont talk or think like that, and thats why its trash. If you cant read it back and sound like a real person having an actual conversation, then it probably shouldn’t be added in the first place.
“Me?! Oh no.” I shake mu head pondering what I just wrote. It was like someone had taken over my body and wrote that mean comment. As if I were not in my own body just watching this stranger who looked like me
So youre saying since youre waiting youre okay with sub par writing? I stopped reading this novel because I chose to spend my heard earned money on a novel that actually has depth and a well structured story
If you make 2 into 1, then you lose so much writing material because you lost that dynamic of having a team member. She’s basically just a tool instead of an ally
VIP, bit for some reason they do not have Audio as to not disturb others. VIP doesnt mean alone. Just more Prestigious
Just like yours with writing
How many times are you going to mention that the higher the rank of Fortress the more difficult it is? Its really getting old
Hes lazy as you can see from all the fillers since chapter one
Take note
It’s annoying how the other characters just somehow know what actually is going on like with in the Fortress about him lying about body language, with Chad and now this girl.
You make it seem like Noah has the skill instead of Lillith