Really good writing quality, and the mc is really realistic and not overly cringe or op in any way. Only thing i might find annoying sometimes, is that we dont get many updates to how old he is or many descriptions on what he looks like........................................and these fckin 0 stars reviews are really dumb........

It does improve somewhat early on, don't know when specifically though. And if you just enjoy the story its not even noticeable tbh :) (i've seen way wayyyyyy worse grammar on this website also)

YEEEES i've been looking forward to this, best of luck! :)

Good writing quality Pretty good upload schedule Good story Development And with the hole swordsman system thing, I've really been looking for something like this. Really looking forward to what happens next!

See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Really some of the best i've written on this site. Really interesting world and cool characters (maybe show more of Enki's smartness) What's most lacking is probably the consistency of uploads but I'm hopeful, and really looking forward to the next chapter!!

Writing Quality is as good as it can be (with some error's here and there but not anything major). Stability of Updates. With 2 chaps a day is really good, you can always comeback the next day and read 2 more chapters. Story Development is a bit slow in the start, but it builds up in later chapters, and frankly is really good. Character Design is a bit lacking in my opinion as I don't really know what the mc is looking like, other than he looks like his father, and what we were told in chapter 1. World Background is really good but slow, we first really get some world building in later chapter (around chapter 60) Altogether a really good story with good upload schedule, super immersed in the world, and is really looking forward to what happens next!

Has too potential, really looking forward to what happens next ..........................................................................................................................

And maybe if you want to continue this webnovel, maybe add some tags so it's easier to find (don't know if that's how it works but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ )

Legit some of the best writing on this website. Really good character development and good story/world building It's so good, that i get excited every time he gets points to invest into his stats Only thing that's missing is the uploads, and sadly i think its dead as it's been a year since the last update, but i just wanted to write this review anyway :)