Fringemind

The beginning was interesting, but then the plot took a wrong turn. There were abrupt jumps in the narrative. The romantic storyline with Wanda and the flirtation with the White Queen don’t fit well with the main character’s original personality. Is this ai generated story or not? In any case, thank you for this story. It was quite a pleasure to read. I’ll be looking forward to the continuation.

Author, thank you for the story. Everything is great, but please make the chapters simpler and more concise. Your description of the battle was too drawn out.

Thk

Thk. I’m waiting for every new chapter.

Thk

Спасибо. Это хорошая книга. 👍

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