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Was it really necessary to delete all the chapters of the previous story? I didn't even make it halfway through and I really wanted to read that story, the new one could be better written but reading how you plan to handle the rewrite adding other worlds is already a different story
The three gorgon sisters in the harem! please!!! Very rarely one or all three sisters are in the harem, although I like Medusa, they never consider Steno and Euryale. And considering that Poseidon will get Divine Dividing, it would be great if Melusine was included in the harem, maybe as the soul inside the Sacred Gear.
mnn... es tu historia así que no puedo quejarme si quieres hacer a Rías la siguiente Mary Stu, pero personalmente la odio, me parece un personaje inútil solo útil para el fanservice... supongo que al menos aquí sera útil hubiera preferido que hubiera Sido alguien como Shirone, Xenovia, Nyx y Ophis, me gustan los clásicos de DXD pero Rías esta más usada que un trapo. aún así es tu historia, así que tus reglas, solo quería dar mi opinión, me encantó el hecho de que Grayfia fuera la Maid, otra gran Waifu
Podrías tener en cuenta a estos mundos para una futura visita? Monogatari Series, me gustaría ver la relación del prota con Kiss Shot. Negima por Evangeline, de mis favoritas y ojalá hubiera una protagonista femenina Kore Wa zombie desu ka por Eucliwood y Seraphim, grandiosas Waifus. También quizás el anime Charlotte? Aunque ese podría integrarse al mundo del protagonista por las habilidades. Helltaker sería divertido, el Rey demonio conquistando a Lucifer la Ceo del Inframundo? Komi-san no puede comunicarse? Sinceramente después de ver la conquista de Kaori quiero ver qué le hace a Komi Kakegurui, cual sería la reacción ante el invicto Rey de los juegos Jiren? Por último pero no menos importante, Kaguya-sama, Akame Ga Kill y Elfen Lied Si pudieras algunos de esos mundos sería genial, algunas de sus Waifus necesitan mucho amor.
Oh otro Waifu de gran nivel, con Medaka, Shizuri, Ajimu y Kaori ya estaba saltando de alegría, pero Kazuki también me encanta, puedes darle un cuerpo y agregarla al Harem? Esa chica es absolutamente subestimada, debería tener más protagonismo Y no importa lo que digan otros, me gusta como llevas la historia, es muy interesante, normalmente mundos con Cross over tan masivos tienden a fallar, pero me parece que lo llevas bien
From what I read in some comments the author plans to create an original novel and he needs to delete stories like this since it seems that they will be a future spoiler, at least that's what I interpreted, and I think he will also publish these deleted or rewritten novels on patreon when they are complete, but even if I wait I won't be able to buy them because I don't have a patreon, I lose out anyway
Thanks for the chapter, a question Baste will I come back? Despite its presentation, I found it interesting. For example that his family has been destroyed and he goes to Orario to look for the portagonist or something like that. Also, being a Blacksmith, will the protagonist make weapons from other animes or swords from legends? it would be great. By the way, I love that Hephaestus and Rose have so much prominence so soon, without a doubt one of the sexiest and most beautiful girls in Danmachi.
By the way, I really liked Zenkichi's attitude, at least he had the courage to take what he wants and not like those anime princes, I would like him to continue like this, more because seeing Youka's attitude when Zenkichi starts to be more perverted with I'm interested in her, there aren't many protagonists like that, besides seeing how Youka begins to give in more and more to Zenkichi's wishes or trying to fight on his land will be fun