Ekmah

that's not à lot when you think about it

SEPARATE MOVIES SCENE FROM STORY SCENE PLEASE. Great story but impossible to know when what's happening is from the story or from the holotapes/movies... please do something about it and it's 5 stars. you could try italics, bold, etc...

you know, there was a better way for the OP OP fruit. MC had the means to copy memories, so make new clones of 66 and 77, put memories in, you now have original 66 and 77 + clone versions. The new clones do the operation. done.

the alignment of the handle doesn't match the sword

if I recall there's a snake that ate quite a lot of gold, no?

it hasn't been a single year tho...

you can also add "possible" at the end of the paragraph

just replace the "from playing" by "if you played" and that's it.

it's classic Chinese author