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totallyNotGarfield6mthReplied to WiseOne_Eidolonit was supposed to be Lower Bound - Upper Bound, which means that the lower bound is 53 and upper is 53
• Talent - 53 ↔ 53 (Random)- totallyNotGarfield6mthReplied to WiseOne_Eidolon
thank you. i really appreciate it. I hope there will be a day when I come back and start writing again. currently i am very busy, maybe in 6-7 months
The major change, and the main reason why I decided to try to rewrite the webnovel is because the main character of this webnovel was plain and boring. In the new webnovel I made him extremely narcissistic from the beginning. - totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
he cant know the difficulty of creating techniques. he thought that it will take a few months or 1-2 years. i will edit it, though
"It's time to go back to Qingfeng Village. It's too hard to advance to the eighth layer here. I need to deepen my understanding of the Blood Devouring Art and the Lianhua Breathing Technique before I can break through." - totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to RengozCh 35 Doom Casket of Terror
- totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to LordOrangeSoda
in new novel ive decided that the system wont be part of mc's life
I am reluctant to add a quest system as well, but if you guys want, I can add it. - totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
bcs he attacked his wife. wu li is a hypocrite
Wu Li's face turned white as he saw his lover fall unconscious. "You monster! You have no pity for women?" - totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
yes, its just that its written in a funny manner
Sage Vast Heaven glared at him and said, "Ye Sha, I can't believe that you are still as unscrupulous as ever! Rampaging inside the Secret Realm of my sect, truly despicable behavior!" - totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to Allan_Marques_0846Ch 35 Doom Casket of Terror
- totallyNotGarfield10mthReplied to Venerable_Read3r
yes, but it will take time for his character to become interesting. he barely faced any hardships. ty for being with me on this journey!
The major change, and the main reason why I decided to try to rewrite the webnovel is because the main character of this webnovel was plain and boring. In the new webnovel I made him extremely narcissistic from the beginning. - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to timeawayfromstress
i dont like this chapter that much either. i tried to make it as interesting and it took me a while to make his transformation more "human-like" however, i am quite confident that the mc was always shown as someone that isnt unreasonable and doesnt kill. i am sorry you didnt like the chapter. do you have any ideas on how i can improve it?
Ch 33 Intense Battle - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to Kont_Archimedes
thank you for the review! i appreciate your feedback. i wanted to say that he isnt unbothered by wordly things. you can see that he is greedy, afraid of most danger(he doesnt want to lose points and he also fears death), and also, he is also hardworking since thats his personality trait(at the beginning, he became an engineer with an average intelligence) also, i tried to make him aware of the power that he has, but it seems i didnt make it right. i made him think of a way for future reincarnations, which i think showed that he is aware of the powers that the system has. you are right though, the mc is not memorable, I dont like him at all either. i am still learning and i like that you gave me feedback.
- totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
i mean, it barely took more than 10s for him to say that. he also wants to torture people mentally or physically, so yeah, he is that petty
"Don't worry, I will soon send Wu Li there so that the two sworn brothers will be reunited," Ye Sha continued. "Also, Wu Feng is already there. I hope when you two reunite, you will have a friendly chat about your lives." - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to HaracasAyeCh 31 Wu Yang's Breakthrough
- totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
thats of course
"Although I just broke through to the late stage Core Formation Realm, I can easily defeat perfection stage Core Formation cultivators! This is unbelievable!" - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to EdgySamurai
he sacrificed himself to block ye sha. thats exactly why i placed so much emphasis on the fact that the other elders still had a wisp left.
Wu Li agreed, "You're right. The Inner Elders who left their consciousness in the trials told me that my Divine Lightning Physique can evolve if I get the special inheritance." - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to DaoistwOqXyh
earth grade is quite rare for pills. black grade pills help in core formation and nascent soul(depending on the pill), and earth grade help in soul palace and great ocean. 10 years isnt that much,especially since you will build tolerance towards it
"The Dream Lotus Pill is of High Quality and is able to induce a lucid dream that lasts some years and only one day will pass in the real world, regardless of cultivation level. While in the lucid dream, one can train their techniques." - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to Creator_of_Chaos
any thoughts? did you like the continuation?
Wu Li's Yellow Grade Spiritual Root! - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to totallyNotGarfieldCh 31 Wu Yang's Breakthrough
- totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to 100Tries
no, he didnt switch the Dao Marks. pretty sure i mentioned that he doesnt want to change them after seeing the new Dao Marks, unless i deleted that paragraph.(ill check) As for whether or not he'll form an essence foundation, it will be revealed later.
Ch 31 Wu Yang's Breakthrough - totallyNotGarfield11mthReplied to Koltiris
he freaks out because of the wine(it makes it so that if he has a small flaw, it will be revealed). also, he is literally around ~45 years old(combined age from his past life + this one), coupled with the fact that he hasn't passed the age of 30 in both of his lives, it will make him seem impatient compared to other immortals who have lived for many years. even if he knows that at some point he will surpass wu li, when is it going to be? 10000 years? 100k? 1million? to be fair, I also wanted to progress the plot a little bit further, I just hope that it didn't feel too forced.
Wu Yang's face turned pale. He didn't know why, but he felt a surge of anger and frustration that he had no say in his own destiny. His breath became heavy and uneven, and his whole body trembled. The more he realized that he was nothing but a background character, a spectator, the more he felt unbearable.