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Papayagoh3mthCommented[Not to mention the eye-beam!] Corun enthused. When the others looked at him oddly he returned a wounded expression. [What? The eye-beam is really neat.]- Papayagoh7mthCommentedAs the words of the Great One rang out in his mind, Beyn experienced a kaleidoscope of powerful emotions that crashed through him like the waves of a storming ocean. His mouth moved, but no sound came out. His ears rang, but he heard nothing. His body twitched, but he could not take a step. Unable to process, he simply stood, jerking uncontrollably, foam dripping down his chin, his eyes staring but seeing nothing.
- Papayagoh11mthCommentedMandibles flex, legs brace. I start to channel gravitational mana and my carapace thrums to life. My Vestibule thunders with an endless river of power that fills the Altar to bursting. I'm ready to rumble.
- Papayagoh1yrCommented
No world only yarrum
In the realm of Yarrum, there is only the worm. - Papayagoh1yrPosted
Allow me to start with the positives of this book. The world-building is extensive, and the feys and their abilities are fascinating. The story, for the most part, is a slice of life and pretty chill despite the plot and faction wars in the background. The main character, for once, is a pretty nice guy for a cultivation novel, and he's constantly improving himself. Now for the negatives. The story is a slice of life and easygoing because the main character can never lose. Forget plot armor, the mc has a plot MAGNET. If the main character picks something up, expect it to be a legendary item/creature and a paragraph or two after to be all about how rare it is. Aside from enemy schemes (They never actually impact the mc), these items are practically the sole driving force behind the plot. MC picks up item/creature and it turns out to be this 1-in-a-million item/creature. A new character will be introduced, and their problems (expect an entire backstory) can only be solved by this special item that the mc has just found.
- Papayagoh1yrCommentedCh 1764 Link Formed by One Person
- Papayagoh1yrCommentedThe powerful expert pilot's true forte was his skilled and aggressive use of integrated ranged weapon modules!
- Papayagoh1yrCommentedBlood New Moon said to the dumbfounded Scorching World Heat Dragon, "The Sky Sundial Jade Coat is as hot as the sun. You're nothing but a main dragon-species fey that hasn't even produced the dragon pearl. Your little tricks with fire will never be able to stand up against the sun."
- Papayagoh1yrCommented
Of course she does
"I think we should do the opposite." - Papayagoh2yrCommentedCh 20 Snap Back to Reality...
- Papayagoh2yrCommented
For some people, demons are pets. Others use them for battles.
Enatsu looked at Sora perched on his shoulder, smiling. After a few moments, he took a deep breath and began to speak again. "Okay, it's obvious that you've really lost your memory, young Yoichi! But don't worry! To thank you for your hospitality, I will help you remember everything you need to know about the demons that populate the World of Lumya!" he affirmed with conviction, standing up and resting his hands on his hips, as if he was a superhero ready to help people. - Papayagoh2yrCommentedCh 3 Hunting