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Arisa_Touduo

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Just someone who scrolls through and reads novels to escape reality. Sometimes I would write but I don't have the confidence to post them.But you know, sometimes I want it to end. That way they would be happy.

2020-03-10 JoinedGlobal
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo2mth
    Replied to JustHappy2Read

    woooaaaahhhhhh ~~! You're so amazing ! đŸ„° You actually found it~ Thank you so much for sharing it~~ â€ïžđŸ„°

    Ch 34 Chapter 0034 Rich Reward 2_1
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    Back to the 60s: The Struggle Career of a Charmed Wife
    General · Ning Xiaobai
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo2mth
    Replied to Whats_it_2_ya

    there's a high chance that it would be her greedy relatives 😑😐 but still hoping it's not 🙏

    Upon reaching home, Feng Qingxue was startled by who she saw in her house.
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    Back to the 60s: The Struggle Career of a Charmed Wife
    General · Ning Xiaobai
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo2mth
    Replied to JustHappy2Read

    i also want to know~

    Ch 34 Chapter 0034 Rich Reward 2_1
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    Back to the 60s: The Struggle Career of a Charmed Wife
    General · Ning Xiaobai
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo4mth
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    I'm sorry, but I really tried to finish this novel. It's good enough but I think it's not my cup of tea? Or perhaps it's because I have not read all of it yet but you know.First of all, I added this novel in my library due to the interesting plot line that I read. But then when I started reading the chapters, it was just weird and off. I don't know what age the FL was when she was abandoned by her mother, but I am guessing she's young. So, how can you not be affected by her abandonment? You don't have any hurt or hate? You just accept it? Well, I guess because your stepdad is rich so perhaps that became a factor. The characters are...weird. There's also a weird sexual tension, or perhaps it's just the FL being attracted to her newly acquired brothers. I guess because she's just 18 turning 19 but it's stated that she's smart, and a specially hired "CIA". But, aren't they supposed to be well trained? It also stated that she has never done a bad job and she completed them all perfectly. However, so far I don't see it. She's just a normal horny teenager who thinks highly of herself and looks down on others while using other people's hands. Well I guess that's one type of a typical FL.Also, I think the author doesn't actually understand how the CIA works. I am not a CIA, but I believe that people that are specially recruited to work there should have something that is special to them. Genius among geniuses. But she's just smarter than normal and skipped years, she doesn't really show any special traits whatsoever to be good enough to be specially picked by the CIA. Also, no matter which job, before they were settled down to work. They would have to undergo intense training specially for that type of work.Perhaps I am just being too perfectionist and critical. This is a fictional novel after all, I guess if you somewhat switch off some of your rational thoughts, you can enjoy this. Also, it's a little bit kind of incest? though they aren't really blood related, they are brothers and sisters by law. Or perhaps it's just the FL being the weird one.

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    My Mom's Second Marriage Gifted Me Seven Brothers
    General · Jay
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo4mth
    Replied to peeyatotz

    I don't think it's about being an independent FL, more like being a human in general I think. No matter what, you would be hurt. If she really did care or loved her mother, she should've had a reaction when she was abandoned. Because the more you care, the more it'll affect you.

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    My Mom's Second Marriage Gifted Me Seven Brothers
    General · Jay
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo6mth
    Replied to Sarah02

    what if they change their grades? i mean ya know, they change it with anna so that the b*tchy step sister would look better

    On the contrary, Anna's figure was also pretty good, but her chest was relatively flat. She didn't have the interest to become the prom queen and usually focused on her classes. Unfortunately, compared to Betty who always ranked first, she was only in the top 5 without fixed ranking.
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    I'm the Villainess in the Apocalypse
    Sci-fi · SoraKeith
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo6mth
    Posted

    First of all, it's so short, the last update was a month ago. Not sure if this is an original story of the author or a translation because it did mention "Not mine!" at the bottom of the description. If it's not an original and it's a translation, hoping to ask for the original story or the author of the story. Thank you~Anyway, for the review. The writing quality is great. The grammar and spelling are all good. You don't need to use your brain to understand it. You just need to enjoy it.The world background, so far, is quite good. Despite this with only 5 chapters.The characters so far are great as well. Again, I should reiterate that this only had 5 chapters. So I am only basing this with that said 5 chapters.Overall, it is a great read, with an interesting plot, good characters and nice pacing. I just hoped that I could read it more.The overall is only 3.8 all due to the updating stability.

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    Doomsday natural disaster space : hoarding supplies
    Sci-fi · Novelsloverotaku
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo6mth
    Posted

    The whole concept of going back in time with space, is one of my cups of tea. Hence, I've read quite a lot with this same background.Let's start with our main character. Before she transmigrated, she seemed like a good and strong female lead. Decisive and cruel if need be. Not the cry and run away type. I guess one of her stupid moments is not killing or perhaps making it so that those scumbag and white eyed wolves are incapable of revenge or be used to be a knife for someone else. She seemed to be too conceited and overestimated herself. Perhaps that made her imperfect so it's not that Mary Sue-ish in the beginning. I guess this makes it somewhat of a spoiler, I'm sorry. Anyway, everyone who reads this type of story will have a general idea that the MC will encounter something in order to transmigrate/go back in time, so it's all good.By the way, I've only read the free chapters which only go up to Ch.14 if I remember correctly and I had to watch 2 videos to unlock chapters 15 and 16 to continue. So this review will only be about the parts I've only read.Anyway, going back. After she transmigrated, she just went with the flow. The new characters who were presented, lack personality so far. Well perhaps because it's still the first few chapters, I didn't get to see much or know anything about the MC's current family. Yes, she's being doted upon by the whole village but you know, except for the Mc and perhaps her AI, everyone else is just like a background character to fill up space. Again, I will repeat, I have only read a few chapters only. I don't have coins nor money for that so I have to do my best to read for free here.Moving on, the background settings, for the 1st timeline. It did state the situation but then the story gave you a curve ball and hit you with spaceship travel etc. So I guess, she came from the far far future. And came back in 2001. I am not that sure on how the province/ villages back then because I've been a city girl my whole life, except when I visited my grandma but I was way too young to remember. So far, there's not much world background for the current timeline except the situation in the village. Still too little.Let's go with the story, so far the story is pretty interesting and it has potential. Whether it continues in this upward motion, I don't know. I'll know when I continue reading. So keep up the good work author! You're doing great.As for the updating stability, I am not too sure. I only saw the author updating like a few hours ago so I gave 5 stars for the evaluation. If I can update my review, then I will if I can observe the situation.The writing quality is overall good. You can read it, the spelling is good so far and the grammar is good. You don't have to fry your brains to understand it. So it's all good, so far.I just really hope it won't go downhill. 😅

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    The Lucky Star Blessing the Whole Village
    Urban · May Lilac
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo10mth
    Commented

    To be honest, I don't really see how the Su family is this all powerful and rich family. They seem to be just a normal rich family. Because if you are truly a powerful and rich family, you will have solid security. Even the normal rich family I see here in real life lives in a community wherein there are guards on the gates 24/7 and CCTV all around. So no one can go inside the community unless you are a family or a person invited by the family living inside the community. They would check your ID and call the house whose family you're visiting to check whether to let them in or not.But here? these two insect type people managed to go to their front door without anyone notifying the Su family.

    Ch 37 Burning Face
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    Mia is Not a Trouble-Maker!
    General · Song Ci
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  • Arisa_Touduo
    Arisa_Touduo10mth
    Commented

    no matter how they're "men" and "too busy" with so and so. Don't they have secretaries or assistants? and didn't the eldest brother married already? so for them to not know what's going on in the internet, is just plain stupidity and a major plot hole that the author just pushed it through so that there are unnecessary conflicts. Besides, they kept on saying that the Su family is so rich and powerful but they actually just let the Gu family like that?

    Ch 31 You Can Sell Blood
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    Mia is Not a Trouble-Maker!
    General · Song Ci
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