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MagneBP666

MagneBP666

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I seek to transform my wild imagination into a book for your enjoyment. ^.^

2020-03-11 JoinedDenmark
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6661yr
    Posted

    Definitely a good read, the descriptions are on point and never gets boring to read. The story isn't dull at all and quite intriguing! Good job!

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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6661yr
    Commented

    Wow, the chapter is so well described and it never really gets boring! I'll definitely keep reading

    Ch 1 Chapter 1. Violet eyes
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    My boyfriend can control the darkness
    Fantasy · funkiller_562
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to NightWind

    Ability orbs cost money ^^

    What she said was true, and I should probably have thought more about the possible danger, but this dream was one I had had for many years now, I would get an ability and work till I reach my limit, then join the army and save the world. Sister Maria had always told me that the ability I would get would be inferior to most others since we were so low in the hierarchy. But I still believed that if you worked hard enough, then anything is achievable.
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    THE GODSENT
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    The book is intriguing and immersive from the start! It gives off a good vibe and you could easily spend the entire day reading it. I would say that if you like the tags, you should really read it!

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    NOTHING EXIST
    Fantasy · Kimchi231
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    Writing could use some check... but other than that, the story has a good flow and interesting plot! At last I would suggest you reading it if you like the tags :)

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    The Doting CEO Alpha and his Wife
    Fantasy · xAlexiax
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    I'm confused as to the writing... It has mistakes here and there but nothing that makes it unreadable or the sorts, but despite that, the author still describes and immerses the reader successfully!

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    Tale of MAKKON
    History · Aby_jsbbs56
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Commented

    +1 for banan AHAHA!

    This chapter has been deleted.
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    not listed
    Fantasy · _banana_
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    Okay... so the only reason it's not a 5-star review is because the chaps are so short, I am unaware about whether the newer chapters are longer or the same but 500 words per chap are just too short for me. WITH THAT BEING SAID! This novel is wonderful quality! The Author does a great job at describing, and it's easy to follow what is happening! You should read if you like the tags!

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    The Demon Lords Unknown Mate
    Fantasy · Armanda_Hax
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    The quality of the writing is very good, and there are no grammatical flaws that annoys you when you read. The only thing that could be done better is the stability of updates. I know the chapters are long but maybe cut them down and update more ^^

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    Divine Demon God
    Fantasy · Hunter101Bomber
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    The author's own style of writing is fantastic and really immersive! It is a bit fast-paced at the start but I find that really well working as you quickly get introduced to the new world! Totally a must read

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    [Null]
    Fantasy · FeralNeko
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Commented

    I see the reference here

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    Crowning Cruel Crow
    Fantasy · TacoKun
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Posted

    Hello fellow readers:) I just wanted to review this because it's sad there is only 1 review. So the story is good and full of fantasy, but the grammar is lacking. I know the author are working very hard on fixing grammar and making new chapters, so I believe it deserves more attention.

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    GDXS: Laws of Menace
    Fantasy · DjxCarma
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to Qbic

    I hope you guys appreciate it, I spend ridicously long time on themđŸ˜©đŸ˜Š

    Ch 7 Demon Jaegers
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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to Anton_Esbensen

    Thank you very much! I hope to see you around as we progress further in the story. ^^

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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to Anden_manden

    Thank you very much! It is chapters like these that motivates me ^^

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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to AJZHEN
    I could feel my legs starting to give up, after all, I did have a parasite gnash through my brain for the last 5 hours, I felt weak, my whole body was sore after breaking and tearing it apart and healing itself over and over again. But I had noticed something, ever since the beginning, my body had begun to heal faster the more injuries that had come... Right now I could heal a new finger in about 10-15 days... but it came with a high price, at least for me that was, this ever consuming hunger was far from practical in my state, my stomach felt like it had a hole in it, and it would corrupt everything inside me if not fed.
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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to AJZHEN

    I look forward to seeing you around. ^^

    Ch 1 The Dungeon
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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to RenPenRen

    There is a badass cover upcoming, so be ready!

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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to RenPenRen

    Thank you very much for the nice review! You can look forward to a new chapter tomorrow already!^^

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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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  • MagneBP666
    MagneBP6663yr
    Replied to Akku_Nidz

    Glad to hear! New chapter out today!

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    Demon Jaeger
    Fantasy · MagneBP666
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