Jody_Carrington

Great start. Interesting character development started. Like the action sequences and the idea of returning to fix the problems.

Strange beginning and needs more background to make things clearer but I like the sting FL.

Good start! will continue to follow you…

I love the main characters and the story moves swiftly . It is difficult to read in English due the errors in translation but I enjoy the story.

Cool fight! Need blood reboot!

love this movie scene!

cute!

I want the picture !

Good luck! Keep trying!