What about tech from the star gate tv series? Some of the the advanced races were human like the tollans. You could even call the ancients human too since technically they are a precusere to the modern humans and even Inter breed ed with them.
Love the story keep up the good work. Wish it was updated more often but ill take what I can get. Great character development you perfectly pulled of the overlooked but lazy and bored main character
On was there some kind of time skip that I missed. One moment there are training the new member next it s the fight with the 7swordsman and cut with no explanation what did I miss?
love the story but the bad grammer will jar me out of the story flow at times. have you thought of using gramercy to try and fix it? other than that it is a well thought out and written story
Story is great most people go stay to overpowered and ruins the story. Only real complaint is the grammer(?) Is a bit choppy. It does not flow.very well at times staging the.reader out of the story most of the time but they story does have potential