SinnedToHeaven

u do u man. Don't force it.

rudeus would be at least 500, no?

I liked especially the foreshadowing of mc missing smt about people and Nina's narrative

this chapter was peak

tru22222222

I'm pretty sure Morgan's potential was ascendant or the mext level. Though that was before she became saint I think.

maybe put some commas as it helps in flow and readability

it's better to just gloss over or better yet, leave the info dump of the original out of ur ff. I bet a liver that the overwhelming amount of people like me just scrolled fast through it.

my point still stands. Even not sound mentally, there's a right way of "venting". He was acting like any traumatized child would if they had power and authority to act upon their entitlement and insecurities. I was not criticizing, I was just pointing it out to make sure author knew what they were doing. I am a zealous advocate of character development after all. But since u pointed it out "mentally unsound", mental instability or insane person would act completely differently.

tffc