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Author is truly a talented writer. The story is refreshing. The writer has her ways with words that would pull the readers in as if they are witnessing the entire story unfold. The characters are well developed and every chapter is interconnected. There is not a single chapter that is boring or uninteresting and that is no easy task. I’m looking forward to read more from this author.
Maybe it’s just me but there seems to be loopholes in this story. If Brina was vice CEO, wouldn’t she be a public figure? If Natalie was Leo’s love interest, isn’t their family is just as powerful? I’m not getting why Leo could not marry her? Not like she came from poor background??
There are some bearable grammatical errors but I like the progression and the development of the story. The story line is somewhat unique. I’m looking forward to read more chapters. Just a thought - the carried over paragraphs from previous chapter to the next is a bit much. It could be better if that is reduced.