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The original can be found on multiple sites but the one I read from is on novelupdate.com the chapters are longer so there won't be as many but has more words per page
This is a thief who stole the original work. you can read up to the newest chapters if you type the title on you browser. This should take you to the original with over 200 chapters for free. Again this is a thief don't support them for stealing others work.
I love but please tone down the chinese talk a little bit as its hard to understand or at least explane what it means at the end of the chapter.
Everything is written in a amazing way but the MC is one of the best characters I have read about. He is not some child that was experimented on and was "broken" or was he a talented person that found life "boring" and god forbid if he was teenager that never lost there virginity and only thinks with there PP. Over all the story has promise and will turn out great if you continue to do what you are doing.
This is a good novel but it have quite alot of Chinese idioms and ideology. Lastly Hela seems to be portrayed in a more light manner than in other novels. Instead of someone who killed possibly billion she is like a dangerous house wife with ambition. All in all you should read it but if you don't like it after chapter 60-80 then it's not for you as the story picks up around there.
Not enough overall design. He is going from one place to another at a flip of a dime, plus things are going super fast as in way too fast for the story. You could have extended the chapters by adding discription for what he will do and why instead of it being on a whim. Overall the story has a chance to be amazing but it just needs a lot of work.
The start is good and how he dies is different but a nice change to other books. The character has a nice personality and overall is a great MC for this kind of book. Overall the book is pretty much perfect besides some small things here and there you can go back to and fix in the future. An amazing book that does not have many equal to it.