I absolutely adore Audrey as a person, and while she can seem quite manipulative and cold at times, she never turns her back on someone that really deserves help. There may be quite a few spelling mistakes and grammatical errors, and I'm not quite sure if Kate is male or female anymore, and spark cities name kept changing at random times. I can't wait to read more about her life and adventures!

what skills do you want? All of them. I'm sorry sir but that's not.... -throws points- All. Of. Them.

from what I've read so far, while touching a few writing tropes, the story is well thought out, the character building is steady, and the reactions of the other players to god slayer are rather accurate in how many gamers would react.

well.....least it isn't zero!