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honestly yes the past few chapters where really dark but i believe that it is a relaxing change from all the PG righting that is out there. i do not think you should change just because people are uncomfortable with your righting. i do believe you should put a warning on title page and description if one is not present and for what chapters they are. P.S. LOVE the novel so far
I do agree that at first i thought it had strong similarity's, but i like how it has a slightly darker tone to it and is getting better as i read more. Great work and keep doing what you are doing.[img=recommend]