RexelfarQode

i hate dumb mc sooooo much, there are nothing to learn from dumb mc. reading about dumb mc act dumb, do something dumb, ask dumb quetion its not very fun, for me. but the writing quaility is superb, and book with general pov is my type. sadly, the dumb mv really turn me of

i hate dumb mc

disgusting

u drag the story so much it took alot to read, when he reach canon i already bored. boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring boring

what a waste, this is FF for fck sake. u describe the so detail to the point i feel dumb founded. bro u describe something that i already know, ar u a fool?

weird pov

cheap setting

i suspect u delete review under 5☆ i suspect u delete review under 5☆ i suspect u delete review under 5☆ i suspect u delete review under 5☆ i suspect u delete review under 5☆

i like ur writing author, but the way u desaign ur character are suck. i absolutly hate the Mc react on any circumstance. the way i see it, he look like sarutobi hiruzen. but ur writing is absolutly great, but i cnt go on no more, for my heart cnt take it, this frustation.!!!

is she braindead?