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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Posted

    Raw? __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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  • John_W_2225
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    Replied to Sipho_Hlatshwayo

    raw?

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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Commented

    No Chapter today?

    Ch 140 Experiment On The Creation Of Authority.
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    GREED: ALL FOR WHAT?
    Fantasy · DMadLord
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Posted

    I love the idea of Nonhuman Mc plz keep on writing it -------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

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    Epizo: Myriad of Possibilities
    Anime & Comics · Sodesu
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  • John_W_2225
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    Replied to BABY_YODA

    I havn't really

    Alright, you get who you are? Good, now take my advice and scram back to whatever church's basement you popped out of you deluded piece of shit. Your mere existence proves that God doesn't exist irl. And if he does, then he must've made the biggest mistake of his life by letting someone so fucking deluded as you to pollute this already fucked up world with your inhuman levels of stupidity.
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    The Mortal God of Olympus
    Book&Literature · Robs511
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Posted

    I like OP, writing quality is good but I would have like more details ( in regards to the World and MC's decisions, motivations, ambitions ) and a more serious MC and more immersive writing (less 4th wall-breaking jokes). But that's just my preference it is a Fanfic after all.

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    Invincible SI: Actually Invincible
    Anime & Comics · JManM
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Posted

    It's a rare find I like it all except the fact that he took Azula with him, so it's not for me. ------------------------------------------------------------------

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    From Mortal to Divinity
    Anime & Comics · Servant_Ambrosius
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Commented

    ????

    Not that much. The attention wouldn't affect his plans significantly, and Tailor-Xinzi could leverage this "subsidy" to speed up the takeover of the Eastern Continent's economy — all while corrupting the Central Domain with a bolder series of moves. Also, there was some poetic flair in using the Central Domain's own resources to take over its vassal empires' economies.
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Replied to Wicked132

    Are you an Arab?

    I guess dying, seeing Firefly burn a punch of people like a kid with a magnifying glass, burning ants in an anthill, and getting shot in a dark alley could toughen up anyone.
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    The Average DC Experience (COMPLETED)
    Anime & Comics · Wicked132
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Posted

    Seemed very promising at first but an Mc with creator powers running around like a wimpy teen ruined it very quickly. Unbearable! ---------------------------------------------------

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    Marvel:Cybertron
    Anime & Comics · Boundless_Child
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Commented

    as per dxd wiki Vampires cannot be photographed as they do not show up in the photo

    So, I made my dastardly plan. You know that vampires are quite adept at summoning bats, right? Well, I could summon mine as well, and since they are nothing but magical constructs made of mana I could modify them to my heart's desire. I made a couple of different variations, one would be small enough to attach itself to the lense of a security camera. The trick? It would show the same feed as the normal camera would, but with a twist, it would filter my presence out, it would make me invisible to all cameras that had these guys attached. With them, I could stroll right into any institution with no problem, with the evidence gone and a couple of minor illusions on the guards and other personnel, I was free as a bird.
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    A Hunger for Blood and Magic - DxD
    Anime & Comics · Khalderas
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Replied to Risks

    Can you tell me which Chapter was that?

    'Bazun...the Overlord of the Ends of Time. In this timeline, only the Golden Lotus and that Xiao Hu girl are somewhat cognizant of his existence. The former will not try to stop his birth, while the latter has already forgotten about her vision, and even if she didn't, she wouldn't understand the full magnitude of what she saw.
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    Reverend Ecstasy
    Eastern · Evil_Dao
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Commented

    This is your story you can do whatever you want but this is very stupid, just because you can't understand something doesn't mean there's no reason or purpose for it.

    Alright, you get who you are? Good, now take my advice and scram back to whatever church's basement you popped out of you deluded piece of shit. Your mere existence proves that God doesn't exist irl. And if he does, then he must've made the biggest mistake of his life by letting someone so fucking deluded as you to pollute this already fucked up world with your inhuman levels of stupidity.
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    The Mortal God of Olympus
    Book&Literature · Robs511
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Replied to John_W_2225

    For physical defense you could just use the Earth refined body.

    ----So in future chapters I would lie to state I'm going to change <Earth Resistance(15%){From Earth Blessing}> to <Physical Resistance(15%){From Earth Blessing}> because it occurred to me that if you get hit with a rock to the face it is 100% a physical attack just me being a little dumb about it till now.-----
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    Avatar: Lion Turtles Champion
    Anime & Comics · ZeOwl
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22251yr
    Commented

    If so other than fire all other elements could also do physical damage no? Like a water whip and so on. Also wouldn't it be possible to bend metals present inside the body with Earth bending? Even without physical damage it could mess up body's functionality.

    ----So in future chapters I would lie to state I'm going to change <Earth Resistance(15%){From Earth Blessing}> to <Physical Resistance(15%){From Earth Blessing}> because it occurred to me that if you get hit with a rock to the face it is 100% a physical attack just me being a little dumb about it till now.-----
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    Avatar: Lion Turtles Champion
    Anime & Comics · ZeOwl
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22252yr
    Commented

    HOW DID IT EVEN WORK IF ITS MADE OF PLASTIC?

    It was already crooked when he was drawing it, and then because of the emergency, he had not colored it at all. He had not even defined its material. It felt like a white plastic gun in his hand. (The background color when drawing was white.) It was crudely made with plastic spikes everywhere, as though it were just taken out of a plastic mold…
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    Custom Made Demon King
    Games · Dark Old Demon
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22252yr
    Posted

    No logic at all! Mc is really afraid of most ridiculous things. At the very least his Soul/consciousness should be strong considering his OP background right? And his body made by the Great gods hurts just by straightening his back? Character development is very slow. Zero's mind overloads all the time even though he is THE CREATOR of the Multiverse??

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    Ball of Nothing
    Fantasy · Destiny_Aitsuji
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22252yr
    Posted

    The story seems good but Author just didn't put any effort into making the backstory of MC consistent and believable. MC is the First Ever Demon Lord to unite all demons under his rule and he died to a simple Mana Suppressing Drug!

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    Demon Lord's Reincarnation
    Fantasy · lynerparel
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22252yr
    Replied to John_W_2225

    Character development is very slow. Zero's mind overloads all the time even though he is THE CREATOR of the Multiverse??

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    Ball of Nothing
    Fantasy · Destiny_Aitsuji
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  • John_W_2225
    John_W_22252yr
    Commented

    TWICE? It would be x10 no?

    "Ahhhh just… what is… this?" Issei was struggling, he felt his entire being just become twice as heavy and could barely move his muscles to try and stand back up.
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    Saiyan In Devil Deminsion
    Others · Andrewstewart002
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