I wish the writer would spend less time descripting so much on the foods.... seriously ... some time as much as 1 1/2 to 2 full pages taking away pages for the story and it get kind of annoying when it happened every time Hera is eating ..... we the reader is not interested in minuscule details of her everything she eats, we paying to read the story, please understand our frustration as it’s too costly for your readers to pay for each chapters as it’s .

I like the storyline of this book but I think the writer made a mistake using American name on the characters as they made no sense as everything point to chinese historical themes and it get confusing and kind of weird and don’t make sense in some way. 🥴🥴🥴

I’m so totally into this book ,kept me totally interested in all 40 chapters and I want to read the next chapters so badly .....so please ... please ...update soon 🤞🤞🤞🤞

The president has so many name that l’m going crazy....Moira...Mary M....and quite a few other,is the writer high when he or she is writing .Can’t you have some respect for your work and some respect to us reader who pays to read your chapters 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Dear writer .... can you make up your mind, are you going for all english characters name or asian Chinese characters name ,because their name kept changing back and forth and it’s driving me as a reader crazy....this book characters names are all jumbled up constantly 😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

Is it the writer problems or the Translator problems but in the end it’s mainly that no one bother to proofread the works. WHY !!!, because whoever it is..... they kept mixing up the characters name and it’s confusing as sh** 🥴🥴🥴🥴

Bravo to writer, very good and interesting book and it kept me wanting to keep reading the next chapters , and that shows how good the storyline is . Please post more chapters soon,thank you 👍👍👍

I want to read more on this book ....please please let this book be pick up ,it’s very interesting

Interesting ... interesting ...dear writer ,great job on your first 40 chapters , hope to read more on this book 👍👍👍

Love the storyline so far,a bit too much brutality against a women but still hope that the book get pick up so that l can read more chapters

Writer please proofread your work ,there are getting more and more spelling mistakes besides translation problems

Dear writer, you are doing a great job so far, except for some transition problems ,love how the story is going and its kept me wanting to keep reading to find out what is going to happen next, so great work 👍👍👍

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I’m totally into this book, love the female lead and love the storyline, please let the book be pick up and be continue 🤞🤞🤞

Hey writer, your story seem to be a little dis-connected from time to time and the action between the characters doesn’t makes sense once in a while....its started really well but then it went off course every once a while ?...?...?..

Interesting book and glad that it is not too long like some book, but the ending is a little too abrupt and boring .

Very interesting storyline and have totally enjoyed reading this book ,hope it will be pick up 🤞🤞🤞

I’m so into this book, love both the male and female lead character and the storyline , please please let this book be pick up and continue

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Oh l’m so into this book, can’t wait to read what happen next 👍👍👍