CrossPath

The same veteran ninja who allowed kUmo-nins to capture a main clan member

The idea of this fanfic is nice and the grammar is already good, but the main problem I have regarding this fanfic is that the Mc is too afraid of the butterfly effect. Like, we get it, knowing the future will come in handy, but the way MC keeps tryibg to avoid changing the plot makes the story seem uninteresting. After all, why read a fanfic when nothing in the plot will change? Even if the author is planning to change the plot in the future, by that time i’m pretty sure many readers would already be tired of The story, me included.

Glasses

The system

A better way to put the wish is; I wish for a body that will fulfill these requirements *proceed to state the requirements Its just like saying, “i wish for all the things in this list to happen to me” *shows the long-ass wish-list filled with various superpowers and riches

Technically this is one wish; A body “I wish to be reincarnated in the body of an uchiha with the appearance of esdeath from akame ga kill that somehow doesnt get affected by MS weakness” is a better way to word the wish There may not be any body that can resist MS Weakness but this is a wish, so god could make a body that would fulfill all the requirements above So my point still stands; this is technically one wish

I mean... the guy is literally a slug You kill a rat or an ant and will the cops arrest you? No, they don’t Same thing happens here, I doubt people actually treats that slime as a human

This reminds me of EMIYA

Its amazing until Volume 3 (the season 3 of the anime), the next 4 Volumes went downhill Real fast