Yes, first I am going to correct the spelling errors in the Spanish version so that when I pass it through the translator it does not have many spelling errors.

si, en esos momentos yo me encontraba un poco mal en el español, lo que pasa es que hablo portugués y me pase luego al español ya que era lo segundo que mas se veía en webnovel

al final lo deje en pausa esa historia y lo oculte, ya que escribir tres historias se me hizo pesado, una vez que acabe una de mis historias tenia planeado continuarla.

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Can you tell me that this is wrong, according to the paragraph the use of "she" refers to her mother and not to ethan, as I understand it unless it is not understood, if you can give me the correct translation I would appreciate it to correct it well , the truth is that I am using gogle translator.

Yes, it is the komatsu knife, I mean the first komatsu knife that becomes one of the strongest toriko knives once it is improved later in the anime and manga.

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If I'm honest, unless I consider an editor for the chapters, I don't think I can correct the spelling errors as I barely have time to write the chapters and I don't have time to review and edit them myself, at the moment I am only editing a few things that they asked me to edit.

The truth there, I had not yet played resident evil 7 when I wrote this story now imagine my face when I discovered that there was a character with the name of ethan in resident evil, I will see how I do it in the future.

Thanks for advising, is that I am very lazy to edit and I did not realize those errors after going through the translator my story, I will be editing the chapters.

Yes, then I start to use quotes, I need to edit the first chapters.

No te preocupes, las armas van a ser futuristas ya que las mutaciones de los zombies van a ser más peligrosas, habrá zombis gigantes y más pero no robot ni zombies androides.

gracias por dar tu opinión, pero como lo dije al principio la historia iba a ser muy lenta, después de todo, esta no es una historia ligada a la historia de los juegos, lo dije muchas veces y no me gusta escribir un copia y pega, por eso estoy dando un transfondo a los personajes, como los juegos de resident evil que siempre cuentan historias de otros personajes ya que hay muchos personajes que son los personajes principales, quiero realizar de esa manera y en parte a lo de los zombies, no se hasta que capitulo leiste pero ya los estoy comenzando a colocar en mi historia de poco, solo que aun no ocurre el suceso que dara comienzo a que umbrella se mueva en descontrol, para dar un pequeño spoiler ya estoy escribiendo en mi borrador la historia que dara inicio a los sucesos de los zombies y al primer juego de resident evil como historia base pero sin ser ninguna copia y pega.

Don't worry, I don't like it when MCs are cuckolds, I like it better when MCs steal other people's girlfriends, but this is a story without any infidelity.

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te recuerdo que el tiempo en ese mundo es de 120 meses por año, si lo ponemos a nuestro tiempo 6 años serian 60 años realmente, haci que un niño de 6 años no seria de sorprender que hasta tenga novia.

Thanks and in a few moments upload a chapter of another story, if you want you can go through it, it's called creating my own world full of beauties.

don't worry, ethan appears in chapter 63, to stay since the volume of resident evil 0 will begin

Don't worry if you want you can leave the story, I was lazy to correct those first chapters in which I do not use the ".." to put that it is the dialogue of a character, after all when I wrote a story in Spanish a while ago I did not I needed because if people understood, but it is for that reason that I began to use it later, I think that in the second volume I am already using "..." for the dialogues of the characters and depsues from time to time I even put the names of people who speak to avoid mistakes.

thanks now i change it