I wanted to give this novel a try after years of seeing it around and I can't say anything about the new chapters, but I'm currently somewhere around chapter 50 and the there are so many simple mistakes or just weird sentence stucture mistakes that it makes it dofficult for me to no just drop it again, but I'm currently out of good novels so I'm giving it a shot in the hope that it will get better. The story is fine, the mc is someone I don't really like, but also not hate. He is fine just a bit boring. Some plotholes here and there and it sometimes lacks the feeling of distance and time. Also the dialog is not that well writen so you somtimes don't really know who is acctually talking and makes conversations feel chaotic and disjointed as if you missed a sentence from someone else or accidentily skipped it. Anyway I will continue to read it now and again and update if it gets better. (I really hope it does)

i think the reason for why it is loosing interest is the way you show off the oc. We see less and less of him and people manly talk about him. Most just want to read a fun advebture of one person and don't really care about the other people. Especially because we didn't really got to learn your oc really well so people tend to care less and less about all this cause we know fairly little about him and his personality cause most of the story is more like a retelling about him. We never really get to know the way he thinks, feels and acts cause a lot of times so much time suddenly went past and suddenly so much changed it can be either overwhelming or just offputting. Anyways that is just my guess. I still like your story. The most important thing is that you have fun with what you write abd enjoy the journey.

Thanks for this great chapter. Now part of me wishes that this was how cannon happned. Although I have the feeling that you want po and tai lung to fight, cause shifu is now passed out and po will think that tai lung killed him when he sees him like that.

Good, but not for me cause harem. For the people who do not care it is certainly worth a shot.

I don't like the mc and the direction the novel was going.

A good novel I would heavily recommend. The only thing you should keep in mind is that the beginning was rough, but it improved a lot over the time. I just dropped it because I don't like harem.

It's bad. For anyone with a brain it just hurts to read. The english is horrendous, with grammar of a mentally disabled 5 year old and the story is like a fever dream written by someone who watched naruto once and thought is was a good idea to make a fanfic while being on crack. All in all if your english is under passing grade or you at least don't mind such a thing you can give this story a try.

He can now think stupid faster. Like me on too much energy drinks.

Well... the beginning is difficult... I don't like how he handled dumbledore at first and the interactions with him. It was cringe not gonna lie, but I was bored and stuck with it and I have to say I'm glad I did. Things got handled better and the story developed in such a way that I don't mind the start anymore. It is a solid hp fanfic and I would recommend giving it a try as the writing qualitiy is good, the updatd stability is insanly good andnthe story is getting more and more interesting.

Thanks for the chapter.

I like the premise of the novel, but basically every over chapter the author changes over to someones over perspective. It just makes it feel for me that the story developes really slowly. What I mean isn't the time in the novel as there are timeskips so that isn't the issue. It is just that we never really stay with the mc so I still have no real clue about his character. I don't see a problem for it with other dbz characters as they are already established and most of us know how they act and feel, but it can't be said for the mc and little spoiler, but the mc didn't really do anything until now. At least most of it is just offscreen things happening. Anyways the fanfic is still in its early stages, so my review will most likely change over the time, but that's it from me for now.

It is one of the vetter chinese fan fics out there, although there are a couple things that annoy me it is very consistent in it's quality. Would recommend to give it a try if you like arcane and league... just don't try to understand how the card thing works. I still don't know when he gets what kind of stats.

This fanfic is a lot, but not anything for me. I really tried to stick with it, but the mc just stays the insufferable a hole and even if snipits of his personality change a bit . It's just annoying after over a 100 Chapters and sucks the joy out of the reading experience. Still worth a try to see if you like it, just don't expect the mc to change for the better anytime soon. Because of that the story feels also very bland, but the update stablility and writing quality are good. That all from me.

Why would he be so worried tho? I mean sure Xeno could just delete him, but also a lot of other people could do the same (like everyone he interacted with until now). It's not like his situation changed much with Xeno being near as he won't be safe until he has gown signigicantly stronger, but until then he can die if he took one wrong turn or says something offensiv even if we ignore Xeno.

It is not bad, but sometimes the character interactions feel akward, which isn't helped with left out discriptions or the exact opposite where there are discriptions that just don't match the situations. The fights are written so so. Not very detailed at some parts and at others they are detailed, but weird. Dunno maybe just not my style.What I like are that the author is improving tho and that he is regulary asking the readers for input for what they would like, so my review can and most likely will change in the future. Anyways if you read this author keep up the good stuff and I hope I can watch you continue to improve.

I tried. I really did try to give it a chance, but it doesn't get better and lager turns into a true crime thing where it feels more like a modern mystery novel than a naruto fanfic. It isn't Naruto anymore not even in the slightest. It feels off and isn't fun to read. And no don't start to comment things like that it is original or so, because that is a load of crap. It isn't a good fic if it doesn't resemble the original world anymore and if the only thing that is the same are the names. It takes away the reason why people read fanfics.

I don't know if the author is new, but there are too many spelling and grammar mistakes and the author doesn't really seem to think about his plots. At least not enough, because he missed an obvious plot hole. Still don't give up author your story is promising, just not for me.

No wonder he was a hardstuck gold. He really thinks it is a good item. I'm sure in realife it would be a lot more helpful but god-tier in game is a sad joke.

Good translation. Regular updates. Story is fun but I just can't fcking handle the stupid name later on... Carl? Really!? Could have named the family Shitstain and it would have botherd me less. It's just so unoriginal that it hurts me to read. Sorry have to go not for me.