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    Prime_Wolf5d
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    Hello, your chapter 75 & 76 is basically the same. Like you had a friend edit it. I’m unsure whether it’s on purpose or by mistake. Just so you know.

    Ch 76 Chapter 76: Gender Equality
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    Prime_Wolf6mth
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    I really like the story, the only criticism, I have at the moment would be, minor mistakes in the story, like writing “2 two birds” in the beginning of the next chapter. But keep up the good work 👍🏾

    Ch 17 Just Trying To Have Fun
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