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The_Crimson_Comics2yrCommentedA sentient RPG system?
*If you say so *- The_Crimson_Comics2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter 1: Wishes (Fixed)
- The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to Dope_4yit
I didn't want to change everything on this story, so I created a new version. I made it a fanfic, and the link to the newer version is in the synopsis. There is an author note at the end to say that I have been posting new chapters in a different place. I just wanted to tell you specifically, because you're the reason I changed it, to explain the change. Thank you for your advice.
Ch 1 The Power Of The Two Sons - The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to Dope_4yitCh 1 The Power Of The Two Sons
- The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to loskro
The chapter will end up getting longer that's for sure. More descriptive writing will come in later also. I actually haven't really fleshed out the world, and thank you for telling me that. I'll work on it. I have a question. How many chapters did you read? The characters slowly get more and more development throughout the story. The big events for the characters just haven't happened yet. This story is still being worked on, but the chapters that have been posted so far were created a while ago so you will see the writing get continuously better.
- The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to Ray_Ryet
Yes, yes he is.
Luna goes in to punch Mark, but Mark grabs her arm. She did a 1 2 3 punch on Mark in the face. Then did a superman punch on Mark. He stumbled and Kai punched Mark in the stomach, and Mark didn't even flinch. Luna chopped Mark in the neck. Mark stumbled and he got pissed so he tried to punch Kai. Kai stepped to the side avoiding the punch. Then Kai retaliated with his own punch. Luna kicked him in the back of the knee leaving him open. Kai punches Mark right in the jaw, and he falls down to the ground defeated. Kai then gets Mark into a headlock ready to break his neck. Luna is horrified by what she sees. - The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to Classic_Goose
I think you're confused. What are you talking about?
This paragraph has been deleted. - The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to BBQChickenAlertBB
You're the luckiest man on earth.
???: Hello kid! My name is Slade Wilson, but you can call me Slade. - The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to ProfessorofCultureCh 10 Departure
- The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to UrizenVergil
Yeah, one thing about this story is that it was written like a year ago. So I am going to have to say none of that happened. I might end up writing something to explain that in later volumes, but for now, let's just say it never happened.
Two Uchiha boys born at the same time from two noble Uchiha families. Renjiro and Ray were those two sons. Being born in the Uchiha clan already gave them a bright future, but they were different. As soon as they were born the sage of six paths paid them a visit. He gave Renjiro the yin half of his chakra, and gave Ray the yang half just before disappearing into the night. The sage needed to do this because Naruto had just died. Naruto died at the age of 117. That made him the longest living man. He died peacefully in the hospital in the room next to Renjiro and Ray. Since Naruto didn't have the seal on him Kurama was let loose. Kurama was angry at humans. Kurama was angry to see how easily they forgot about Naruto, and all he did for the world. Since the new uprising of the Uchiha clan they were mostly used in fighting Kurama. So they wanted the one of their own to have Kurama sealed in them. No matter what the junchuriki would be helping the village. Therefore the Hokage agreed, and one of Boruto's grandkids used the reaper death seal to seal the half of the nine-tailed fox in the sons of the highest ranked Uchiha. Those sons were Renjiro and Ray. Ray getting the yin half of Kurama, and Renjiro getting the yang half. These kids won't grow up is the same world as Naruto. Ninja are much stronger now, and the world is very different. - The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to UrizenVergil
The new Hokage is the tenth Hokage. I would never make it Boruto. You will eventually learn who it is.
Two Uchiha boys born at the same time from two noble Uchiha families. Renjiro and Ray were those two sons. Being born in the Uchiha clan already gave them a bright future, but they were different. As soon as they were born the sage of six paths paid them a visit. He gave Renjiro the yin half of his chakra, and gave Ray the yang half just before disappearing into the night. The sage needed to do this because Naruto had just died. Naruto died at the age of 117. That made him the longest living man. He died peacefully in the hospital in the room next to Renjiro and Ray. Since Naruto didn't have the seal on him Kurama was let loose. Kurama was angry at humans. Kurama was angry to see how easily they forgot about Naruto, and all he did for the world. Since the new uprising of the Uchiha clan they were mostly used in fighting Kurama. So they wanted the one of their own to have Kurama sealed in them. No matter what the junchuriki would be helping the village. Therefore the Hokage agreed, and one of Boruto's grandkids used the reaper death seal to seal the half of the nine-tailed fox in the sons of the highest ranked Uchiha. Those sons were Renjiro and Ray. Ray getting the yin half of Kurama, and Renjiro getting the yang half. These kids won't grow up is the same world as Naruto. Ninja are much stronger now, and the world is very different. - The_Crimson_Comics3yrReplied to ProfessorofCultureCh 10 Departure