Paradgrim

this is, by far, the most useful skill she has gained so far

people do that anyway when reading a book. the writer should trust that the readers remember details well enough that they aren't a complete surprise. or utilize a details vagueness to take both the characters and readers off, like cherekov's gun

which was stated, like, twice in the previous chapters. details like these shouldn't be repeated multiple times as it messes with a stories flow

My form flies*

over shouldn't be capitalized. maybe re word the first sentence to make it more clear who's opinions is who's

he specified with his technique, these hands are not a technique

maliciously touch is crazy 😭