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This story is absolutely fantastic. I would recommend it to anyone and likes the game and mindset storyline with Side of cultivation.

I think it’s a typo but in the previous paragraph you have stated it’s a woman using ‘she’ for her gender description but in this paragraph you have used he?

I am confused is he wearing a t-shirt/polo type shirt or a blouse?? Cause a blouse is usually a fitted women’s shirt style. Nothing against him wearing one but you stated earlier that he was wearing a famous vampire movie shirt

Why the change in upper limit for this here

Wow blew my mind this story is fantastic!!! I love how it keeps me on my toes. There are twists and turns which might seem like they are predictable but in an unexpected way

This story is very well put together. It’s not a complete OP situation from the start. Instead, it’s a natural progression and the use of more than just one person to win any issues that come up.

Love it so so much it sucks you straight in and I for one keep coming back for more!!!! It’s a great storyline that although in the same world as asoiaf is very different

I like his point of view and the smooth changes between characters. The background is detailed and descriptive but relies on people having read or watched original versions.

This story is incredibly interesting and has been written well accounting for some understanding of the original books. If you hadn’t already read it it may be a bit confusing but you could still follow it.

Really good but dark start my question is where is Harry?