This book would have been good if not for the author making the MC stupid, by not killing the thugs before and inviting more trouble to himself! I'll give it a few more chapters the drop if the stupidity continues...

This would have been worthwhile if the MC had general Rico and the other elites use the amulet in prisons to have some of the really bad criminals, to be sacrifices and be made as capsules to save the MC's other family members and other worthy comrades!

Absolultely great! The MC should do this from time to time...

Do continue from this point instead of hacking your brain to rewrite. It's good as it is already. You can use the time to write more new chapters instead. Cheers! :)

Great that you're back and updated both your novels. Thanks and keep on writing! Cheers!

Finally...he has done it! Thanks for the chapter!

Great from beginning to end...the best One Piece fanfic! Can't wait for the next epic journey you'll be giving out. Thanks a lot! Cheers!

Awesome ruthlessness. Removing trouble and garbage from it's root. Thanks for the chapter and keep on writing!

Awesome, thanks for the chapter! Keep on writing...

3 hands up on praise...3rd is the D! [img=recommend]

This is a really good book. Please keep writing and don't drop. Thanks for the chapter!