UnfriendlyAngel

Yugito nii? Konan?

Amazing, do you have a p@treon?

thanks for the chapter

make more or ill eat your liver

Dude is actually a retard. check his comment history.

Seriously dude go fuck yourself, maybe learn how to not sound like an absolute retard while you're at it.

Why do you type like a retarded little Chinese boy?

Please tell me you're continuing this.

If you want to read a novel where everything is handed to the mc on a silver platter, go read one of the thousands of mediocre Chinese fanfictions. It's honestly incredibly shitty of you to tank the reviews of a new novel because you disagree with a single choice. You could've just left. Also, the reason he didn't pass out from the 400 clones he used against Mizuki was the kyuubi offsetting the mental strain with it's chakra. His choice was honestly inconsequential and to come to the reviews and pout like an entitled child makes me feel bad for anyone who has to get within 10 meters of you.

Honestly one of the best Naruto fanfics I've seen in a while, the grammar and structure is neat and easy to follow with no confusion. Names are all correct, author clearly knows his stuff. The development and character/world building is perfect, so much that some of the sadder bits actually affected me and I feel like I can clearly picture everything in my mind. Some choices are a bit controversial, but remain within the realm of possibility. Overall an amazing fanfic and I hope the author sees it to the end. (If you decide to continue this on another platform let us know)